Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers, correct tense and grammar, and add one specific detail. Use linking words for coherence. For example, replace hesitations (“uh”, “maybe like”) and correct structure (“I was really good at biking”) and give a short specific example (where or how often).

Exemplo: Yes. I had a small white bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighbourhood and cycled to school every day, which helped me become quite confident at riding.

Sugestão: Improve clarity, grammar and completeness: begin with a clear opinion sentence, use correct vocabulary (bikes, bike lanes), avoid repetitions and hesitations, and finish the reason fully with a specific example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are more popular now than they were a decade ago because both local and national governments have built many bike lanes. For example, my city added several dedicated cycle paths last year, which makes cycling safer and more convenient.

× Yes, of course when I was a child I had uh, maybe like a a white bike.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child I had, maybe, a white bike.

Run-on and filler punctuation: The sentence needs clear clause separation and removal of filler duplication. Use commas to set off 'maybe' and remove the duplicate 'a a'. This keeps the past-tense 'had' appropriate for the time frame. Suggestion: Pause and remove filler words, and proofread for duplicate articles.

× I used to ride a bike around my accommodation and from my home to my school as well.

✓ I used to ride my bike around my accommodation and from my home to my school as well.

Possessive usage: 'a bike' is grammatically possible, but 'my bike' is more natural here because the speaker already established ownership. The tense 'used to' correctly indicates habitual past action. Suggestion: Use possessive pronouns when referring back to a previously mentioned owned item.

× So I really good at biking.

✓ So I was really good at biking.

Missing verb: The sentence lacks the linking verb 'was' to form the past description. Because the speaker refers to ability in childhood, use past tense 'was'. Suggestion: Ensure sentences about past states include the proper auxiliary or linking verb (was/were).

× I think so bites are more popular now compared with, uh, one or two decades ago because the government, they, uh, the, the local government and central government, they try to establish a bite land in order to.

✓ I think so. Bikes are more popular now compared with one or two decades ago because the local and central governments are trying to establish bike lanes.

Multiple issues: 'bites' is a misspelling of 'bikes' (word choice), subject-verb agreement and article use: 'the local government and central government' should be plural 'governments' and followed by plural verb 'are trying.' The verb phrase should be progressive 'are trying' to indicate ongoing action. 'bite land' is incorrect; the correct term is 'bike lanes.' Also remove filler words and complete the clause. Suggestion: Check plural nouns and verb agreement, choose correct vocabulary ('bike lanes'), and use present continuous for ongoing efforts.