Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, fix tense and grammar, avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases. Use 2–4 supporting sentences with linking words and specific details (who gave it, how old you were, what you learned).

Exemplo: Yes. I had a bicycle as a child. My cousin sent it to me as a birthday gift when I was seven, and I used it every day to ride around the neighborhood. Because of that bike, I learned how to balance and gain confidence on the road.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct grammar and use linking words. Provide specific supporting details such as statistics, examples (shared-bike services, commuting habits), and reasons (cost, convenience, traffic). Keep to 2–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are a cheap and convenient way to commute. For example, many cities have shared-bike companies that allow people to rent a bike for short trips, and students and office workers often use bikes to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yes, it's for my cousin who's sent to me as my birthday gift.

✓ Yes, it was sent to me by my cousin as a birthday gift.

The student uses incorrect pronouns and passive structure. 'It's for my cousin who's sent to me' is ungrammatical: the intended meaning is that the cousin sent the bike to the student. Use the past tense passive 'was sent to me' and the preposition 'by' to indicate the agent. Also 'a birthday gift' is the natural noun phrase.

× I really like it because it helped me to learn how to reading the bag when I was a child.

✓ I really liked it because it helped me learn how to ride the bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes tenses and has wrong verb forms. 'I really like it' should match the past context 'when I was a child' so 'I really liked it'. 'helped me to learn how to reading' is incorrect: after 'learn how to' use the base verb 'ride', not the gerund 'reading'. Also 'bag' is incorrect noun; context requires 'bike'. Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helped me'.

× I think it is because it's very convenient for us to to go to work or study.

✓ I think so because it's very convenient for us to go to work or school.

The duplicated 'to to' is a typo. 'I think it is' is acceptable but 'I think so' is more natural when referring to the previous question. 'Study' as a verb is less natural after 'go to'; use 'school' as the noun. Tense remains present to match the general statement.

× And in our country there also have many companies to do the shared bag.

✓ And in our country there are also many companies that run bike-sharing services.

The original has multiple errors: 'there also have' is incorrect subject-verb structure (use 'there are'). 'Companies to do the shared bag' uses wrong verbs and nouns: 'do the shared bag' should be 'run bike-sharing services' or 'provide shared bikes'. Use 'that run' to introduce the relative clause. This corrects pronoun/structure and word choice.

× So I think it's very popular.

✓ So I think bikes are very popular.

Pronoun 'it' is vague; make the subject explicit 'bikes' to avoid ambiguity. Present tense is appropriate for a general statement about popularity.