Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and tense consistency, shorten and structure the response, reduce hesitations, and add one clear supporting detail. Start with a direct topic sentence in past tense, then add a concise supporting reason or example using a linking word. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike as a child because the legal driving age in my country is 18. However, when I was 16 I obtained a learner's permit, so I started learning to ride a two-wheeler from my father, who works as a riding instructor.

Sugestão: Make a clearer, more organized answer: give a topic sentence about popularity, then two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms), avoid fillers, and provide concrete examples or comparisons to strengthen the response.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, many people in small towns and middle-aged commuters prefer two-wheelers because they are cheaper and easier to park. Secondly, due to heavy traffic, riders can travel faster and save time compared with cars.

× No, I don't have bike when I was child because in our home country, the minimum age of person to drive is 18.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because in our home country the minimum age to drive is 18.

Multiple issues: article errors and tense. 'have bike' needs an article 'a bike' (Grammar problem type 22). Also tense mismatch: examiner asked about past; use past simple 'didn't have' not 'don't have' (Grammar problem type 5). Removed unnecessary words 'of person' and added 'a' before 'child' -> 'a child'. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits and include articles with singular countable nouns.'

× So at that time I was around 15 to 16.

✓ So at that time I was around 15 or 16.

Use 'was' is correct for past tense but the numeral connector should be 'or' not 'to' when indicating an approximate age (Grammar problem type 26: sentence structure also). Suggestion: say '15 or 16' or 'about 15 or 16'. 'Around 15 to 16' is unidiomatic.'

× Uh, I usually Start learning because, uh, at 16 we got a learning license and at 16 I Start learning about, uh, how to drive the two Wheeler from my father because my father is a trainer of the.

✓ I started learning because at 16 we got a learner's permit and I learned how to ride a two-wheeler from my father, who is a trainer.

'Start' should be past 'started' because this is a past event (Grammar problem type 5 past tense issue and 6 present tense issue). 'Learning license' is better expressed as 'learner's permit'. 'Start learning about how to drive the two Wheeler' is awkward; use 'learned how to ride a two-wheeler'. 'Trainer of the' is incomplete; change to 'who is a trainer'. Also use articles: 'a two-wheeler' (Grammar problem type 22). Suggestion: keep verbs in past tense for past events and use correct nouns and articles.'

× These bikes are very popular in my country, in my country, uh, the people lives in the small town as well as they have a maximum middle-aged.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country. People who live in small towns and many middle-aged people prefer them.

'These bikes' is acceptable but repetitive; use 'Bikes' for general statement. 'the people lives' has a subject-verb agreement error: 'people live' (Grammar problem type 27) and plural noun 'people' shouldn't take 'the' here. 'the small town' should be 'small towns' (plural) (Grammar problem type 1). 'they have a maximum middle-aged' is ungrammatical; meant 'many middle-aged people'. Suggestion: use plural nouns and match verb forms; simplify sentences for clarity.'},{

× So you, they usually prefer to have a 2 Wheeler instead of cars, uh, due to the traffic congestion, uh, some people are workaholic, so they usually prefer to two Wheeler because it's easy to go faster than the car.

✓ They usually prefer to have a two-wheeler instead of a car because of traffic congestion. Some people are workaholics, so they prefer a two-wheeler because it is easier to go faster than a car.

Preposition and article issues: use 'instead of a car' not 'instead of cars' if comparing singular, or make both plural. Use 'because of' for reasons (Grammar problem type 11). 'prefer to two Wheeler' missing 'a' and wrong structure; say 'prefer a two-wheeler' (Grammar problem type 22). 'workaholic' should be plural 'workaholics' to match 'some people' (Grammar problem type 1). 'it's easy to go faster than the car' should be 'easier to go faster than a car' (comparison and article corrections). Suggestion: fix prepositions, articles and plural forms, and keep consistent comparisons.'