Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and natural: remove fillers (uh), use a clear topic sentence, and add a brief specific detail. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences. Use linking words if adding reasons or examples.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I rode my bike almost every day after school because cycling was my favourite hobby. For example, I often rode to the park with my friends and practised tricks, which helped me stay active and make friends.

Sugestão: Improve accuracy and coherence: avoid pronunciation/word choice mistakes (writing -> riding), remove hesitation, start with a clear opinion, then give specific supporting details using linking words (for example, especially, because). Keep sentences shorter and precise.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. In particular, people in rural areas rely on bicycles for short journeys, such as going to the market or school. For example, many children cycle to school and farmers use bikes to travel between fields, which makes cycling a common and practical choice.

× Yes I did, I uh, rode my bike like every day after school because it's my hobby also.

✓ Yes, I did. I rode my bike almost every day after school because it was my hobby.

Problems: 'I uh, rode' is okay past tense but needs punctuation; 'like every day' is informal — use 'almost every day'; 'because it's my hobby also' mixes present tense 'it's' with past context — should be 'it was my hobby'. Also place adverb properly and remove filler. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for habits in the past and use clear connectors and punctuation. ID:5 (Past tense issue) and ID:27 (Subject-verb agreement/errors in tense consistency).

× I believe that, uh, when we were young, we love writing a bike and in my country, yes, it's very popular there and especially in the countryside, we always ride a bike.

✓ I believe that when we were young, we loved riding bikes, and in my country they are very popular, especially in the countryside where we always rode bikes.

Problems: 'we love writing a bike' has wrong verb 'writing' instead of 'riding' and wrong tense 'love' while referring to the past — should be 'loved riding bikes'. 'It's very popular there' mixes singular 'it' with plural 'bikes' — use 'they are very popular'. 'We always ride a bike' is present-tense generalization about past habits — use past 'we always rode bikes'. Suggestions: use correct verb 'ride'/'riding', match tense to time frame (past), use correct pronoun number for bikes, and keep consistent pluralization. ID:8 (Verb + -ing form) and ID:5 (Past tense issue) and ID:1 (Singular and plural issue)