Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cần nói rõ ý chính ngay đầu, sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự câu, tránh mơ hồ. Ví dụ: nói rõ rằng bạn đã có xe đạp, hiện trạng của nó (quá nhỏ/không còn dùng được), hành động bạn làm với nó (đã cho/đã gửi cho anh trai) và thời điểm xảy ra. Dùng các liên từ hợp lý (so, therefore, then) và các thì đúng (past simple cho hành động trong quá khứ).

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, it became too small for me, so I couldn’t use it anymore. Therefore, I gave it to my younger brother, and he still uses it to ride around the neighborhood.

Sugestão: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và những cụm mơ hồ như “I don't know”. Nên đưa ra lý do cụ thể (tiện lợi, tốc độ, địa hình, thời tiết) và dùng liên từ để tổ chức ý (because, although, however). Sử dụng từ vựng chính xác như “motorbikes”, “more common”, “convenient”.

Exemplo: I think bikes are not as popular as motorbikes in my country because motorbikes are faster and more convenient for daily commuting. Although some people use bicycles for exercise or short trips, most prefer motorbikes due to traffic and longer distances.

× Yes I did but it's too small so now and I can use it anymore.

✓ Yes, I did, but it was too small so I couldn't use it anymore.

The student mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. The bike being too small is a past situation, so use past tense 'was' and 'couldn't' (past of 'cannot'). Also add commas for clarity and remove 'now and'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent by describing past situations using past verbs (was, couldn't).

× Then I send it to my brother and he can use it to bike.

✓ Then I sent it to my brother and he could use it to ride a bike.

The verbs should be in past tense to match the sequence ('Then I sent'). 'Send' is base form; use 'sent' (past). 'He can use it to bike' is awkward: use 'could use it to ride a bike' to reflect past ability. Suggestion: match verb tenses in a sequence of past events and use natural collocations ('ride a bike').

× Hmm, probably I think so.

✓ Hmm, I think so.

Redundant use of 'probably' and 'I think' is acceptable but awkward. Not a strict grammar error; main issue is word order and redundancy. Suggestion: use either 'Probably' or 'I think so.'

× But I I can see that in my country people use motorbike more than use bike because motorbike is I don't know, but I think so.

✓ But I can see that in my country people use motorbikes more than bicycles because motorbikes are more convenient, I think.

Pronoun repetition 'I I' is a typo. Comparison structure 'more than use bike' is incorrect; use plural nouns 'motorbikes' and 'bicycles' for general statements. 'Motorbike is I don't know' is unclear; replace with a clear reason. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general facts and complete the comparison with a clear adjective or explanation.