Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence, concise supporting details, and correct word forms. Keep it natural and avoid repetitions. For example, start by stating whether you had a bike, then give two specific details (where it came from and what you did with it). Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly, and correct verb forms (e.g., "was handed down to me").

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had an old bike that was handed down to me by my cousin, and it was quite worn. Because it was in poor condition, I refurbished it by replacing the tires and repainting the frame, which made it look and ride much better.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct opinion, then support it with specific reasons and a brief example. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "therefore", "however") to connect ideas and avoid unfinished sentences. Use appropriate vocabulary ("infrastructure", "terrain", "commute").

Exemplo: I don't think bikes are very popular among adults in my country because the infrastructure for cycling is poor and the roads are hilly. Therefore, most people prefer cars or public transport, although some athletes and cycling enthusiasts still ride for exercise on safer routes.

× When I was a child I had a bike it was old and I got it from my cousin.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike; it was old and I got it from my cousin.

Run-on sentence and punctuation: The original joins independent clauses without proper punctuation. Also past tense verbs are correct (had, got), but clauses need separation for clarity. Suggest adding a comma after introductory phrase and a semicolon or period between independent clauses.

× So it is my cousin handed on me I it was very old and I had to refresh it and re restore.

✓ My cousin handed it down to me; it was very old, so I had to refurbish and restore it.

Multiple problems: incorrect verb phrase 'handed on me' and incorrect word order 'I it', awkward use of 'refresh' and 're restore'. The corrected sentence uses correct phrasal verb 'handed it down to me', fixes word order, and replaces 'refresh'/'re restore' with appropriate verbs 'refurbish and restore'. Maintain past tense to match context.

× Bikes are not that popular in my country, especially in adults.

✓ Bikes are not very popular in my country, especially among adults.

Preposition use: 'in adults' is incorrect; use 'among adults' to indicate a group. Also 'not that popular' is conversational; 'not very popular' is more natural. Present tense 'are' is appropriate.

× Only athletes can ride bike or they enjoy riding bike because the radius and the condition here is not that supported to make a person ride a bike easily so they usually.

✓ Only athletes can ride bikes or they enjoy riding bikes because the roads and the conditions here do not support riding easily, so they usually do not.

Several errors: 'ride bike' needs plural noun 'ride bikes' or the article 'a bike'. 'the radius' is incorrect word choice; likely 'roads' or 'terrain' is intended. 'the condition here is not that supported' is ungrammatical; use 'do not support'. Subject-verb agreement: 'roads and conditions ... do not support'. Sentence was also incomplete; added 'so they usually do not' to finish the thought. Maintain present tense for general statements.