T-shirt— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea twice. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of saying "I find wearing T-shirts as comfortable" and then "It does not restrict my movements," you can combine these ideas.

Exemplo: I wear T-shirts daily because they are comfortable and do not restrict my movements throughout the day.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit confusing and contradictory. You say T-shirts are practical and do not restrict movement, but then say we cannot do many jobs wearing T-shirts. Try to clarify your opinion and provide specific reasons with linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because they are practical and comfortable. However, for some jobs that require formal attire, T-shirts are not suitable.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly with proper sentence structure and use linking words. Also, be specific about the fashion preferences of older people.

Exemplo: In my country, older men usually wear traditional white T-shirts, but most older women prefer not to wear T-shirts at all because they consider them informal.

Sugestão: Good answer but try to use past tense consistently and avoid mixing tenses. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to wear T-shirts when I was a kid, and I often chose the styles myself when I went shopping with my parents.

× I wear T-shirts daily because I find wearing T-shirts as comfortable.

✓ I wear T-shirts daily because I find wearing T-shirts comfortable.

The phrase 'find wearing T-shirts as comfortable' is incorrect because 'find' is followed directly by an adjective without 'as'. The correct structure is 'find something adjective', so 'find wearing T-shirts comfortable' is correct.

× Yes, because T-shirts are very practical and it does not restrict our movements during the day.

✓ Yes, because T-shirts are very practical and they do not restrict our movements during the day.

The subject 'T-shirts' is plural, so the pronoun referring to it should be 'they' instead of 'it'. Using 'it' causes a subject-verb agreement error.

× We cannot do many jobs wearing T-shirts.

✓ We cannot do many jobs while wearing T-shirts.

The sentence is grammatically correct but can be improved for clarity by adding 'while' to indicate the time when the jobs cannot be done. No plural or singular error here, but the sentence structure can be enhanced.

× All the people in my country don't like to wear T-shirts other than the white T-shirt for men below the throat a traditional clothes and usually ladies, old ladies, old woman do not like to wear T-shirts at all.

✓ Most people in my country don't like to wear T-shirts other than the white T-shirt for men below the throat, which is traditional clothing, and usually ladies, old ladies, and old women do not like to wear T-shirts at all.

The original sentence has several issues: 'All the people' is better as 'Most people' for naturalness; 'a traditional clothes' is incorrect because 'clothes' is plural and 'a' is singular; 'old woman' should be plural 'old women' to match the list; commas and conjunctions are needed for clarity.

× I used also to select the kind of T-shirts from the market when I go shopping with my Mama and Baba.

✓ I also used to select the kind of T-shirts from the market when I went shopping with my Mama and Baba.

The phrase 'used also to' is better as 'also used to' for natural word order. Also, 'when I go shopping' should be in past tense 'when I went shopping' to match the past tense context of 'used to'.