T-shirt— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but it has some redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. For example, avoid repeating 'so' at the beginning of sentences and use correct expressions like 'I live in the countryside' and 'the climate is tropical and humid'.

Exemplo: I live in the countryside where the climate is tropical and humid. Because of this, I usually wear light clothes. Therefore, I often wear T-shirts since they are light and comfortable.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains some incorrect words like 'dishes' instead of 'T-shirts'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing. Try to use clear vocabulary and organize your ideas logically with linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I buy T-shirts almost every month because I love their designs. They are quite cheap and available in many styles, so it is easy to find fashionable ones that I like.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but the sentences are long and sometimes unclear. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Also, check grammar and word choice for clarity.

Exemplo: Older people in my country usually prefer wearing shorts rather than T-shirts. When they do wear T-shirts, it is mostly at home. They like plain and simple T-shirts without any printed images because they find them comfortable and easy to wear.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use past tense correctly and organize your ideas clearly with linking words. Avoid unnecessary repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid. My parents used to buy them regularly and introduced me to wearing T-shirts. I wore them often because my parents did the shopping for me, and I liked wearing them a lot.

× I live in a countryside which is very hot and humid, so the temperature is kindly tropical climate.

✓ I live in the countryside which has a kindly tropical climate and is very hot and humid.

The phrase 'the temperature is kindly tropical climate' is incorrect because 'temperature' cannot be described as a 'climate'. Also, 'kindly' is an incorrect adjective here; 'kind of' or 'kindly' is not appropriate. The sentence needs restructuring to correctly describe the climate of the countryside.

× Yes, almost every month because I love the design that they can have and since the dishes are very cheap, we can buy them easily and there are multiple designs that you can choose from, so dishes are as much as easier as well as fashionable than sorts.

✓ Yes, almost every month because I love the designs they have and since the T-shirts are very cheap, we can buy them easily and there are multiple designs to choose from, so T-shirts are much easier to get as well as more fashionable than shorts.

The word 'dishes' is incorrect; it should be 'T-shirts'. Also, 'design' should be plural 'designs' to match the plural subject. The phrase 'as much as easier' is incorrect; it should be 'much easier'. The sentence also confuses 'sorts' which should be 'shorts'.

× So I like them so I buy it often.

✓ So I like them so I buy them often.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'them' which is plural (T-shirts). The pronoun should agree in number with its antecedent.

× I think older people mostly wear shorts rather than T-shirts, but the T-shirts that they wear is usually for the home.

✓ I think older people mostly wear shorts rather than T-shirts, but the T-shirts that they wear are usually for home.

The subject 'T-shirts' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'for the home' is better expressed as 'for home'.

× So they like something that is plain and not kind of images that is painted in the T-shirt.

✓ So they like something that is plain and without any kind of images painted on the T-shirt.

The phrase 'not kind of images that is painted' is grammatically incorrect. It should be 'without any kind of images painted on' to correctly express the idea.

× So it will be plain, simple and very comfortable to wear and they find it very convenient to wear it because you do not have to tie the button and you just simply wear it and just have.

✓ So it will be plain, simple and very comfortable to wear and they find it very convenient because you do not have to tie buttons; you just simply wear it.

The sentence has redundant pronouns and an incomplete ending ('just have'). Also, 'tie the button' should be 'tie buttons' or 'button up'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Absolutely. My parents used to bought them on a regular basis.

✓ Absolutely. My parents used to buy them on a regular basis.

The phrase 'used to bought' is incorrect because 'used to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the past tense. The correct form is 'used to buy'.

× They I think they were the one first they introduced me the twist to T-shirts.

✓ I think they were the ones who first introduced me to T-shirts.

The sentence has redundant pronouns and incorrect structure. 'They I think they' is incorrect. Also, 'the one' should be plural 'the ones' to agree with 'they'. 'Introduced me the twist to T-shirts' is unclear and corrected to 'introduced me to T-shirts'.

× So I had to like wear them regularly because I do not have to go to the shopping.

✓ So I had to wear them regularly because I did not have to go shopping.

The phrase 'do not have to go to the shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'did not have to go shopping' to match past tense. Also, 'like' is unnecessary here.

× So they were the one that do the shopping for me.

✓ So they were the ones who did the shopping for me.

'They' is plural, so 'the one' should be 'the ones' and 'do' should be 'did' to match past tense.

× So I used to wear pieces all the time and I used to like them.

✓ So I used to wear T-shirts all the time and I used to like them.

The word 'pieces' is vague and unclear. It should be replaced with 'T-shirts' to specify what was worn.