T-shirt— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and sentence structure, avoiding redundancy, and using linking words for coherence. For example, instead of repeating 'convenient and comfortable' twice, you could combine ideas and use linking words like 'because' and 'moreover' to connect your points smoothly.

Exemplo: I wear T-shirts almost every day, about five times a week, because they are convenient and comfortable. For instance, when I need to get up early for class, putting on a T-shirt saves me time. Moreover, they are comfortable to wear when I exercise.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to start with a direct answer, then explain with specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repeating the same idea in different words.

Exemplo: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because I wear them frequently. I like to have a variety of styles to choose from, so I usually buy several at a time.

Sugestão: Your answer has some unclear words ('teachers' seems incorrect) and could be more precise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'as'. Also, avoid filler sounds like 'MMM'.

Exemplo: T-shirts are very fashionable among older people in my country. They prefer T-shirts over polo shirts because they are comfortable, easy to wear, and help keep them cool during the summer.

Sugestão: Your answer is good with clear reasons and supporting details. To improve, combine short sentences for better flow and use linking words like 'therefore' or 'also' to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I did wear T-shirts when I was a kid. I grew quickly, so my height and weight changed often; therefore, my parents bought me T-shirts because they were comfortable, affordable, and easy to replace. Also, they helped me stay cool during the summer.

× I almost wear it every day because it is convenient and comfortable When I need to get up early to have my class put on AT shirt can save my time.

✓ I almost wear them every day because they are convenient and comfortable. When I need to get up early to have my class, putting on a T-shirt can save my time.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'T-shirts' which is plural, so 'them' should be used. Also, 'AT shirt' seems to be a typo and should be 'a T-shirt'. The sentence structure is improved by splitting into two sentences and correcting verb forms.

× Yes I do since I wear T-shirts often so I need to choose more styles and the amount is also required so I often buy T-shirts in that I can have many styles of T-shirts to choose from.

✓ Yes, I do. Since I wear T-shirts often, I need to choose from more styles and quantities, so I often buy T-shirts to have many styles to choose from.

The phrase 'the amount is also required' is awkward and incorrect. 'Amount' is not appropriate for countable items like T-shirts; 'quantities' or 'number' is better. The sentence is also improved by adding commas and clearer phrasing.

× MMM very fashionable. In my country, older people prefer to wear teachers instead of polo shirts or other forms of clothes.

✓ Very fashionable. In my country, older people prefer to wear T-shirts instead of polo shirts or other types of clothes.

'Teachers' is a typo and should be 'T-shirts'. Also, 'MMM' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× Because T-shirts are convenient to wear, they are comfortable, and they can often keep people cool during summer.

✓ Because T-shirts are convenient to wear, comfortable, and can often keep people cool during summer.

The sentence is grammatically correct but can be improved by removing redundant pronouns for conciseness.

× When I was a kid. I grew up quickly, so my height and weight changed frequently.

✓ When I was a kid, I grew up quickly, so my height and weight changed frequently.

The original has a sentence fragment 'When I was a kid.' which should be connected to the next sentence with a comma.

× Because of this, my parents often bought me T-shirts since they are comfortable, affordable, and easy to replace when I outgrew them.

✓ Because of this, my parents often bought me T-shirts since they were comfortable, affordable, and easy to replace when I outgrew them.

The sentence refers to past events, so 'are' should be changed to 'were' to maintain past tense consistency.

× What's more, it can also keep me cool during summer times.

✓ What's more, they can also keep me cool during summer time.

'It' should be 'they' to refer to plural 'T-shirts'. Also, 'summer times' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'summer time' or simply 'summer'.