Number— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat natural but could be more concise and structured. Avoid redundancy like 'my memory is very poor, like a sieve' and focus on a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Also, try to use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: No, I am not good at remembering numbers because my memory is quite poor. Therefore, I usually save all phone numbers in my mobile to avoid forgetting them.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clearer sentence structure and grammar. Start with a direct response, then explain with specific details using linking words. Avoid awkward phrasing and improve vocabulary usage for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I will definitely use numbers in my future work because I want to become a chartered accountant. Numbers play a crucial and permanent role in this profession.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Also, use correct vocabulary and sentence structure to express your ideas naturally.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child because I was very interested in the subject. Moreover, I liked solving different math puzzles and tricks, which made learning fun.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain why certain numbers are important with specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: Several numbers are important to me, such as 710-1517 and 24. These numbers are significant because they relate to special occasions like birthdays, weddings, and my mother's university.

× Definitely numbers will use in my future work becauses I want to become chartered accountant in my future life so that's why numbers placed permanent and quintessential role. In my career life.

✓ Definitely numbers will be used in my future work because I want to become a chartered accountant in my future life, so that's why numbers play a permanent and quintessential role in my career life.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'numbers will use' instead of the passive form 'numbers will be used'. Also, 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. The verb 'placed' should be 'play' to correctly express the role of numbers. Additionally, articles like 'a' before 'chartered accountant' are necessary. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× When I was too young that time my favorite subject was meds becauses I'll had. Keen interest in mathematics subject.

✓ When I was very young, my favorite subject was math because I had a keen interest in mathematics.

The phrase 'I'll had' is incorrect; it should be 'I had' to correctly use the past tense. 'Meds' is likely a typo for 'math'. 'Because' is misspelled as 'becauses'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Moreover, I like to solve different tricks of mathematics.

✓ Moreover, I like to solve different mathematical tricks.

The phrase 'tricks of mathematics' is awkward; 'mathematical tricks' is more natural. The preposition 'of' is unnecessary here and can be omitted for better flow.

× There are many numbers which are very crucial for me, for example, 710-1517 and 24 these days.

✓ There are many numbers that are very crucial for me, for example, 710-1517 and 24 these days.

The sentence is mostly correct but 'which' should be replaced with 'that' for restrictive clauses in defining essential information. This is a subtle grammatical preference in English.

× These days are very. Essential for me and be 'cause in these days there are some special Cajun like birthday party and marriage. University of my mother. And more on.

✓ These days are very essential for me because there are some special occasions like birthday parties, marriages, my mother's university events, and more.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'be 'cause' should be 'because'; 'Cajun' is likely a typo for 'occasions'; 'birthday party and marriage' should be pluralized; 'University of my mother' is unclear and rephrased as 'my mother's university events'. Prepositions and articles are corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.