Number— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but contains a small grammatical error and could be more natural. Instead of saying "I really on my phones," you should say "I really rely on my phone." Also, try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at remembering numbers because I often forget phone numbers. Therefore, I usually rely on my phone or notes to store important numbers.

Sugestão: Your answer is too brief and does not directly address the question. You should provide a clear topic sentence and then explain your answer with supporting details using linking words to make it coherent.

Exemplo: It depends on the type of work I do in the future. If my job involves finance or data analysis, I will definitely use numbers frequently. However, if I work in a creative field, numbers might not be as important.

Sugestão: Your answer is quite good with clear reasons and supporting details. To improve, avoid filler words like "Uh" and try to use linking words such as "because" or "therefore" to make your answer more fluent and natural.

Exemplo: No, I didn't enjoy studying maths as a child because I found it difficult and confusing. Moreover, my math teacher wasn't very supportive, so I preferred subjects like literature and history.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but starts awkwardly with "But these are important to me." Instead, start directly with the topic sentence. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and check for small errors like "close one" which should be "close ones" and "parents anniversary" which should be "parents' anniversary."

Exemplo: Certain numbers are very important to me. For example, my birthday is special because it marks the day I was born. In addition, I always remember the birthdays of my family members and close ones, and I make sure to celebrate my parents' anniversary too.

× I really on my phones or notes to store important numbers.

✓ I really rely on my phone or notes to store important numbers.

The sentence is missing the verb 'rely' which is necessary to complete the meaning. Also, 'phones' should be singular 'phone' as typically one phone is used to store numbers. The pronoun 'my' is correct but the verb is missing, causing the sentence to be incomplete.

× But these are important to me.

✓ These are important to me.

The word 'But' at the beginning is unnecessary and creates confusion as it does not connect logically to the previous sentence. Removing 'But' makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× I also remember the birthdays of my family members and close one.

✓ I also remember the birthdays of my family members and close ones.

The phrase 'close one' should be plural 'close ones' to match the plural 'family members' and to correctly refer to multiple close people. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× I always make sure to celebrate my parents anniversary too.

✓ I always make sure to celebrate my parents' anniversary too.

The word 'parents' is plural and possessive here, so it requires an apostrophe after 'parents' to indicate possession. This is an article and possessive form issue related to plural nouns.