Number— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' which affect fluency. Try to be more concise and clear, directly answering the question with a topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and unnecessary hesitation sounds.

Exemplo: Yes, I have a sharp memory and can easily remember numbers. For instance, I still recall all my parents' four different phone numbers without difficulty.

Sugestão: Your response lacks clarity and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Focus on giving a clear, direct answer with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid filler words to improve fluency.

Exemplo: I might use numbers in my future work, especially if I become an accountant. In that role, numbers would be essential to perform my tasks accurately and efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete at the end. Try to provide a complete, coherent response with clear reasons and avoid mixing topics abruptly. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child because it challenged me to think logically. However, now I prefer studying English to improve my communication skills and pronunciation, which helps me in my daily life.

Sugestão: Your answer has many hesitations and ends abruptly. Try to avoid filler words and complete your thoughts fully. Provide specific examples with explanations and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: All numbers are important to me, but some have special meaning. For example, September 3rd is important because it is my wedding anniversary, and February 10th is also special as it marks another significant event in my life.

× I can use numbers in my future work if I join as a accountant.

✓ I can use numbers in my future work if I join as an accountant.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before a word starting with a vowel sound. 'Accountant' begins with a vowel sound, so the correct article is 'an'. This is a common article usage rule in English.

× numbers, uh, proves very helpful doing my to do a great job in work, do a great job at.

✓ numbers, uh, prove very helpful in doing a great job at work.

The verb 'proves' should be 'prove' to agree with the plural subject 'numbers' (subject-verb agreement). Also, the phrase 'helpful doing my to do a great job in work, do a great job at' is awkward and incorrect. The correct preposition is 'helpful in doing' and 'a great job at work' is the proper phrase.

× Yes, when I was a child that time I really enjoyed studying math, but nowadays I usually prefer studying as a English because I want to enhance my learning skills as well as my pronunciation.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I really enjoyed studying math, but nowadays I usually prefer studying English because I want to enhance my learning skills as well as my pronunciation.

The phrase 'studying as a English' is incorrect. The preposition 'as' is unnecessary and the article 'a' before 'English' is incorrect because 'English' is an uncountable noun here. Also, the phrase 'that time' is redundant when 'when I was a child' is used.

× So it helps me to do a great job and it is also helped me to achieve a.

✓ So it helps me to do a great job and it has also helped me to achieve a lot.

The phrase 'it is also helped me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it has also helped me' to indicate present perfect tense. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'achieve a' which is incomplete; adding 'lot' completes the thought.

× Well, to be honest, uh, all the numbers are same for me.

✓ Well, to be honest, uh, all the numbers are the same for me.

The phrase 'are same' is incorrect; the adjective 'same' requires the definite article 'the' when used in this context, so it should be 'are the same'.

× there are some numbers which plays a very crucial role in my life.

✓ there are some numbers which play a very crucial role in my life.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to the plural noun 'numbers', so the verb should be plural 'play' instead of singular 'plays'.