Number— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve naturalness and accuracy: avoid unclear phrases (e.g. "expert in November numbers"), reduce redundancy and keep to 3–4 sentences. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Also correct grammar (e.g. "I am an expert at remembering numbers" or "I became good at numbers") and use precise vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes — I’m good at remembering numbers. For example, in high school my teacher taught me a finger-based mnemonic that helped me recall phone numbers and dates. Because I practised that method regularly, I’m now able to remember many numbers without writing them down.

Sugestão: Be clearer and more coherent: state your position directly, avoid incorrect word choices ("carrier" → "career", "software's hardware's" is confused), and give one brief reason. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep sentences concise. Also avoid negative overgeneralisation — IT often involves numbers, so reflect that accurately if true.

Exemplo: I’m planning to switch my career to information technology, but I don’t expect to use numbers heavily in my role because I aim to work on user-interface design rather than data analysis. However, I might still use basic numbers occasionally, for example when measuring screen dimensions or tracking version numbers.

Sugestão: Make answers natural and avoid exaggeration: start with a direct answer, then provide one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Correct tense and phrasing ("I used to score over 90%"; "I remember my favourite teacher"). Limit to three sentences and vary vocabulary (e.g. "enjoyed", "favoured").

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child. I often scored over 90% because I attended extra tuition classes that helped me practise more, and as a result I found the subject both rewarding and fun. I also remember my favourite math teacher who encouraged my interest.

Sugestão: Be specific and concise: state which types of numbers matter to you (e.g. phone numbers, prices, dates), then give one clear example using linking words. Correct grammar and word choice ("in life", "when you pay for groceries", "these are used in our daily lives"). Keep to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: Practical numbers are most important to me, such as prices, dates and phone numbers. For example, when I go grocery shopping I always check the price per unit so I can calculate the total cost and compare value between products.

× I have a very good memory and I am expert in November numbers.

✓ I have a very good memory and I am an expert at remembering numbers.

Missing article 'an' before 'expert' and incorrect phrase 'expert in November numbers'. Use the verb 'remembering' with 'expert at' for correct English. Suggestion: add the article and use 'expert at remembering X' or 'good at remembering X'.

× When I was in high school, my teacher gave me a technique of using fingers to remember numbers.

✓ When I was in high school, my teacher gave me a technique of using my fingers to remember numbers.

The original sentence omits the possessive pronoun before 'fingers'. Use 'my fingers' to indicate whose fingers are used. The past tense 'gave' is correct; only the pronoun is missing.

× These days I am very good at numbers by the practice and experience.

✓ These days I am very good with numbers because of practice and experience.

Incorrect preposition and article use: 'good at numbers' can be 'good with numbers'; 'by the practice and experience' is awkward. Use 'because of' plus uncountable nouns without 'the' to explain cause.

× I am planning to move my carrier to the information technology field.

✓ I am planning to move my career to the information technology field.

Spelling error: 'carrier' should be 'career' (noun meaning profession). 'Planning to move my career to' is the correct collocation for changing professional field.

× There I would be playing with the computer software's hardware's challenging task, so I won't believe that I would be using numbers in that field.

✓ There I would be dealing with challenging computer hardware and software tasks, so I don't think I will be using numbers much in that field.

Problems: possessive forms 'software's hardware's' are incorrect; use 'computer hardware and software tasks'. 'Won't believe that I would be' mixes tenses and modal forms; use 'I don't think I will be' to express future doubt. Also 'playing with' is informal and not suitable for 'tasks'.

× To be very honest with you, I was an expert in mathematics.

✓ To be very honest with you, I was good at mathematics.

'Expert in' is not ungrammatical but may be overstated; more natural is 'good at mathematics' or 'I was an excellent student in mathematics'. This change is optional stylistic adjustment; original grammar acceptable but clarity improved.

× I used to get above 90% every time I took extra tuition classes apart from school which made me practice more mathematics to get good grades.

✓ I used to get above 90% when I took extra tuition classes outside of school, which made me practice more mathematics to get good grades.

Use 'when' instead of 'every time' for smoother flow; 'apart from school' is better as 'outside of school'. Comma needed before 'which' because it introduces a non-restrictive clause.

× I remembered my favorite teacher of mathematics.

✓ I remember my favorite mathematics teacher.

Tense and word order issue: 'I remembered' suggests past memory but context implies ongoing memory; 'remember' is more natural. Also 'teacher of mathematics' is awkward — use 'mathematics teacher'.

× Numbers are an important part of the life.

✓ Numbers are an important part of life.

Unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'life'. Use the general noun 'life' without an article when speaking in general terms.

× It will come to you in every situation of life.

✓ They come up in every situation in life.

Pronoun and tense: 'It' is incorrect for plural 'Numbers'; use 'They'. 'Will come to you' is awkward — use 'come up'. 'Every situation in life' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× For instance if you go to grocery you would have to remember the numbers of the item and when you gonna pay the for the groceries you have to calculate the numbers for the total fee.

✓ For instance, if you go to the grocery store you have to remember the item prices, and when you go to pay for the groceries you have to calculate the total cost.

Multiple errors: missing article 'the' before 'grocery store'; 'gonna' is informal and incorrect in standard English — use 'go to' or 'are going to'; misplaced 'the' before 'for the groceries' removed; 'numbers of the item' is unclear — use 'item prices'; 'total fee' replaced with 'total cost'. Also add commas for clarity.

× So these are much made in our life.

✓ So these are very common in our lives.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Much made in our life' is incorrect. Use 'very common in our lives' to convey that numbers frequently appear in life. Use plural 'lives' for general people or 'life' without 'our' if speaking abstractly.