News— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，且句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

Exemplo: I am interested in some news, especially those related to recent events, but I am not very interested in international news.

Sugestão: 回答不连贯，表达不清楚，缺少完整句子。建议使用完整句子，清楚说明通过哪些平台获取新闻，并避免语法错误。

Exemplo: I usually find news through social media platforms like Weibo and Red Nose because they are interesting and easy to use.

Sugestão: 回答内容较丰富，但句子结构复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子，明确表达理由，并使用恰当的连接词。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to be a journalist because I am majoring in international economic law, so I have knowledge about international affairs and economics. I think I can become a financial journalist.

Sugestão: 回答内容不明确且语法错误严重，表达混乱。建议简洁回答是否阅读新闻，并简要说明原因。

Exemplo: Yes, I read some news this morning, mainly about crime cases, but I didn't have much time to read more.

Sugestão: 回答不连贯，表达不清楚。建议使用完整句子，明确说明是否经常与朋友讨论新闻，并举例说明。

Exemplo: Yes, I often talk with my roommates, who are also my good friends, about news, especially legal cases that I haven't seen on news apps.

× Depends on the news for me because I don't interested in the in some some international news, but the the news that I have to attention to it in recent years I'm really interested in some.

✓ It depends on the news for me because I'm not interested in some international news, but the news that I have to pay attention to in recent years I'm really interested in.

句中“depends on the news for me”缺少主语，应为“It depends on the news for me”。“I don't interested”中动词形式错误，应为“I am not interested”。“have to attention to it”中“attention”应使用动词短语“pay attention to”。此外，句子结构混乱，需调整使其更通顺。

× Are you refunding without some application platforms such as Weibo on the Red Nose? I think uh, the new sound on them, it really is more interesting and the most simple for me like I do every dates and comprehensive it, but sometimes I.

✓ Are you getting news from some application platforms such as Weibo or Red Nose? I think the news on them is really more interesting and the simplest for me, like I check every day and find it comprehensive, but sometimes I don't.

句中“refunding without”用词错误，应为“getting news from”。“on the Red Nose”应为“or Red Nose”。“the new sound on them”应为“the news on them”。“the most simple”应为“the simplest”。“every dates”应为“every day”。句子结构不完整，需补充完整。

× Yes, I really want to be a journalist because if I have to have this kind of opportunities and because I'm majoring international economic law, which is about the international conditions and economic knowledge is I think I can be the financing journalist.

✓ Yes, I really want to be a journalist because if I have this kind of opportunity and because I'm majoring in international economic law, which is about international conditions and economic knowledge, I think I can be a financial journalist.

“have to have this kind of opportunities”中“have to”用法错误，应为“have”。“opportunities”应为单数“opportunity”与“this kind of”搭配。缺少介词“in”在“majoring international economic law”中。句中“financing journalist”应为“financial journalist”。句子结构需调整使其更通顺。

× I had lots of cranberry crime cases and the sum of news of our, our source program and uh, and I have no time to wait with them a lot because I have no time and in.

✓ I read lots of crime cases and the news from our source program, but I didn't have much time to watch them because I was busy.

“I had lots of cranberry crime cases”中“had”时态不当，应为“I read”或“I saw”。“cranberry crime cases”可能是误听，应为“crime cases”。“sum of news”应为“some news”。“wait with them”用词错误，应为“watch them”。句子结构混乱，需调整。

× Yeah, it's always talk about in your face my roommates, which is in my better friend of our class now and we are in a simulator. So we always communicate about the about the low cases that I have never seen on some application flat, flat.

✓ Yeah, I always talk about news with my roommates, who are my best friends in our class now, and we are in a simulator. So we always communicate about the law cases that I have never seen on some application platform.

“talk about in your face my roommates”表达错误，应为“talk about news with my roommates”。“better friend”应为“best friends”。“low cases”应为“law cases”。“application flat, flat”应为“application platform”。句子结构需调整使其更通顺。