News— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，表达更自然流畅。例如，“I am very interested in news because my major involves drama, cinema, television, and literature, which requires me to keep up with various news. It provides me with diverse information.”

Exemplo: I am very interested in news because my major involves drama, cinema, television, and literature, which requires me to keep up with various news. It provides me with diverse information.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，应注意时态和句子结构，且避免冗长。例如，“In the past, I used to find news by reading newspapers or watching videos. But now, with the development of mobile phones, I usually use apps like TikTok to get news.”

Exemplo: In the past, I used to find news by reading newspapers or watching videos. But now, with the development of mobile phones, I usually use apps like TikTok to get news.

Sugestão: 回答较好，但有语法错误和用词不当，应注意句子结构和词汇准确性。例如，“When I was six, I dreamed of becoming a journalist because I found it exciting to discover news stories and share them with people worldwide. I believe being a journalist can help others understand important events and make a positive impact.”

Exemplo: When I was six, I dreamed of becoming a journalist because I found it exciting to discover news stories and share them with people worldwide. I believe being a journalist can help others understand important events and make a positive impact.

Sugestão: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，且内容不够具体。建议简洁明了地表达观点，如“Yes, I read the news every morning because it helps me broaden my horizons and stay informed, which benefits my studies.”

Exemplo: Yes, I read the news every morning because it helps me broaden my horizons and stay informed, which benefits my studies.

Sugestão: 回答表达不清且有语法错误，应简洁明了地回答问题，例如“Yes, since our major is related to drama, cinema, and literature, we often discuss news to improve our understanding and prepare for our future careers.”

Exemplo: Yes, since our major is related to drama, cinema, and literature, we often discuss news to improve our understanding and prepare for our future careers.

× Because it gives me different informations.

✓ Because it gives me different information.

information 是不可数名词，不能用复数形式 informations，应使用单数形式。

× Well, in the pastor I will find the news by reading newspapers or listening to the videos.

✓ Well, in the past I found the news by reading newspapers or listening to the videos.

这里描述过去的动作，应该使用过去时 found，而不是将来时 will find。

× But nowadays as the development of the mobile phone I will found news.

✓ But nowadays, with the development of the mobile phone, I find news.

现在的情况应使用一般现在时 find，而不是过去时 found 或将来时 will found。

× Use my phones an just to use the app like TikTok and read books and so.

✓ I use my phone and just use apps like TikTok and read books and so on.

原句中 'Use my phones an' 结构不正确，应改为 'I use my phone and'，并且 'app' 应为复数 'apps'，'and so' 应为完整表达 'and so on'。

× I believe being a generalist to can help others understand important events and make a positive impact on society.

✓ I believe being a journalist can help others understand important events and make a positive impact on society.

generalist 与上下文不符，应为 journalist；'to can' 结构错误，应去掉 to。

× reading the news in the morning is one of my life Rune.

✓ Reading the news in the morning is one of my life routines.

Rune 不是正确单词，应为 routines，表示“习惯、常规”。

× It's also I think reading the news in the morning could help me to broaden my heroes and and let me know a lot of different things or over the road and will help me to my profession.

✓ I also think reading the news in the morning could help me broaden my horizons and let me know a lot of different things around the world, which will help me in my profession.

heroes 应为 horizons，表示“视野”；'or over the road' 应为 'around the world'；'help me to my profession' 应为 'help me in my profession'。

× Yes, of course, as I said, our major is called dramas in them on television literature.

✓ Yes, of course, as I said, our major is called drama, cinema, television, and literature.

dramas 应为 drama，且原句中 'in them on' 是错误的，应改为列举专业名称。

× So it is one of our duties to fund the news and have become. Conservate conversation about them.

✓ So it is one of our duties to find the news and have conversations about them.

fund 应为 find；'have become. Conservate conversation' 结构错误，应为 'have conversations'。