News— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp ý hợp lý hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I am interested in news. I usually spend my mornings reading online news to keep myself updated, especially about economic events.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý rõ ràng hơn.

Exemplo: I usually follow news accounts on Twitter and other social media platforms because it allows me to access news quickly and easily.

Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt với ý chính rõ ràng, nhưng câu trả lời hơi dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và kết thúc câu đầy đủ.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to be a journalist because it is an amazing job. I imagine traveling around the world to collect interesting news and publish it in newspapers or online platforms.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I read the news this morning. I saw some economic news and also read a discussion about young people being trained in social media.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen, câu ngắn gọn và từ vựng chính xác hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I often discuss current events with my friends because we are the same age and share similar interests. We enjoy sharing our different opinions.

× I usually spend my morning scrolling 2 news, paste news on online, online news to update information around me and especially economic occurrence.

✓ I usually spend my morning scrolling through news, posting news online, and reading online news to update information around me, especially about economic occurrences.

The word 'news' is uncountable and should not be preceded by a number like '2'. Also, 'paste news on online' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'posting news online'. 'Economic occurrence' should be pluralized to 'economic occurrences' to refer to multiple events.

× Where I usually will actively. Re twister into the my online account so that I can read news easily.

✓ I usually actively retweet on my online account so that I can read news easily.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Re twister into the my online account' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'retweet on my online account'. The sentence needs to be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, I find out this way could have me to to gain information.

✓ Well, I find that this way helps me to gain information.

The phrase 'could have me to to gain' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'helps me to gain' or 'allows me to gain'. Also, 'find out' is not appropriate here; 'find that' is better for expressing an opinion.

× Well, sometimes I imagine that I can travel around the world to collect interesting news and publish on newspaper on or some online platform and.

✓ Well, sometimes I imagine that I can travel around the world to collect interesting news and publish it in newspapers or on some online platforms.

The phrase 'publish on newspaper on or some online platform and' is incorrect. The definite article 'the' is not needed before 'newspaper' when speaking generally; 'in newspapers' is correct. Also, 'on some online platform' is better than 'on some online platform and' which is incomplete.

× Yes, I have read portable news this morning. But I remember this morning I read about an economic news in also some some discussion about young people trained in social media.

✓ Yes, I have read portable news this morning. But I remember this morning I read about economic news and also some discussion about young people trained in social media.

'An economic news' is incorrect because 'news' is uncountable and does not take 'an'. The article 'an' should be removed. Also, 'some some' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'some'.

× Yes, sometime I discussed with my friends about our current situations because we are the same age when and we have the same interested in what happening around us.

✓ Yes, sometimes I discuss with my friends about our current situations because we are the same age and we have the same interests in what is happening around us.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Discussed' should be 'discuss' to match the present tense context. 'Interested' should be 'interests' as a noun. 'What happening' should be 'what is happening' to be grammatically correct.

× We we also believe that we can share our different.

✓ We also believe that we can share our differences.

The phrase 'share our different' is incorrect; the correct noun form is 'differences'. Also, the repeated 'We we' is a typo and should be corrected to a single 'We'.