News— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇，如"confidential"应为"confident"。

Exemplo: Yes, I am interested in watching the news because I want to understand what is happening around the world. It also helps me feel confident about new policies and transportation updates.

Sugestão: 句子结构混乱，语法错误多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单句，注意时态和介词的正确使用，避免重复。

Exemplo: I usually read news on my cellphone because I can access websites anytime I want. I prefer reading English news as it helps me improve my vocabulary and writing skills.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达不清楚。建议先明确表达观点，再用具体理由支持，注意句子完整性。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to be a journalist because I enjoy writing. I want to share my experiences and observations with others. Although it is challenging, I am willing to work hard.

Sugestão: 表达不流畅，句子结构混乱，信息重复。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和不必要的细节。

Exemplo: Yes, I read the news this morning. I usually read news during my breaks, even if only for a few minutes, to stay informed.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

Exemplo: Yes, I often discuss news with my friends because it relates to our daily lives. We talk about various issues happening around us, and I enjoy hearing their opinions.

× Yes, I am interested in watching news because I have the commitment to. Understand everything happening in the world and I feel the confidential when I realized that the new policies and other transport.

✓ Yes, I am interested in watching the news because I have the commitment to understand everything happening in the world, and I feel confident when I realize the new policies and other transport changes.

原句中存在句子结构错误，句子被错误地分成两部分，且“confidential”用词错误，应为“confident”。建议将句子合并，保持连贯，并使用正确的词汇。

× Yes, I am interested in watching news because I have the commitment to. Understand everything happening in the world and I feel the confidential when I realized that the new policies and other transport.

✓ Yes, I am interested in watching the news because I have the commitment to understand everything happening in the world, and I feel confident when I realize the new policies and other transport changes.

“news”前应加定冠词“the”，因为这里指特定的新闻内容。

× Are usually read the news around my cell phone and I can access to the website slides at it anytime that I wanted and I usually read the English news that can improve my vocabulary and improve my writing skills.

✓ I usually read the news on my cell phone and I can access the website slides anytime I want. I usually read English news that can improve my vocabulary and writing skills.

“read the news”前应加主语“I”，且“on my cell phone”是正确的介词搭配，去掉多余的“to”在“access to”。“anytime that I wanted”应改为“anytime I want”保持时态一致。

× Are usually read the news around my cell phone and I can access to the website slides at it anytime that I wanted and I usually read the English news that can improve my vocabulary and improve my writing skills.

✓ I usually read the news on my cell phone and I can access the website slides anytime I want. I usually read English news that can improve my vocabulary and writing skills.

“around my cell phone”应改为“on my cell phone”，表示使用手机。动词“access”后不加介词“to”。

× Yes, I have a rather than usual this morning.

✓ Yes, I have read more than usual this morning.

原句缺少动词，且表达不完整。应补充动词“read”，并用“more than usual”表达比较。

× Yes, I have a rather than usual this morning.

✓ Yes, I have read more than usual this morning.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致表达不清晰。

× Are usually read the news around my cell phone and I can access to the website slides at it anytime that I wanted and I usually read the English news that can improve my vocabulary and improve my writing skills.

✓ I usually read the news on my cell phone and I can access the website slides anytime I want. I usually read English news that can improve my vocabulary and writing skills.

“access to”是不正确的搭配，应为“access”。“around my cell phone”应改为“on my cell phone”。

× Yes, I would like to be a journalist are because I like a writing enter.

✓ Yes, I would like to be a journalist because I like writing.

“are”用错，应删除；“a writing enter”表达错误，应改为“writing”。

× Yes, I would like to be a journalist are because I like a writing enter.

✓ Yes, I would like to be a journalist because I like writing.

句子结构混乱，存在多余词汇，导致表达不清晰。

× I will love to share my experience and my observation during my during my writing and it's a challenge worker to be a journalist because you have to be very you have to.

✓ I would love to share my experience and observations through my writing. It's a challenging job to be a journalist because you have to be very dedicated.

句子重复且结构混乱，表达不完整。应简化并补充完整表达。

× I will love to share my experience and my observation during my during my writing and it's a challenge worker to be a journalist because you have to be very you have to.

✓ I would love to share my experience and observations through my writing. It's a challenging job to be a journalist because you have to be very dedicated.

“I will love”时态和语气不合适，应为“would love”。“challenge worker”表达错误，应为“challenging job”。

× Usually read the news when I have a break time and since I produce English everyday.

✓ I usually read the news when I have break time, and since I practice English every day.

“have a break time”应改为“have break time”或“have a break”。“produce English”表达错误，应为“practice English”。

× Usually read the news when I have a break time and since I produce English everyday.

✓ I usually read the news when I have break time, and since I practice English every day.

“everyday”应为副词短语“every day”，表示“每天”。

× So whenever I have some break and just maybe maybe just a few minutes, I will browse on the website and read a paragraph or two of the inclusion articles written.

✓ So whenever I have a break, even if just a few minutes, I will browse the website and read a paragraph or two of the included articles.

“browse on the website”应改为“browse the website”。“some break”应为“a break”。“inclusion articles”表达不当，应为“included articles”。

× Yes, I often talk with my friends about the news because of the that is related to our daily lives and the topic includes a variety of.

✓ Yes, I often talk with my friends about the news because it is related to our daily lives, and the topics include a variety of issues.

“because of the that”表达错误，应为“because it”。“topic includes”应为复数“topics include”。

× Yes, I often talk with my friends about the news because of the that is related to our daily lives and the topic includes a variety of.

✓ Yes, I often talk with my friends about the news because it is related to our daily lives, and the topics include a variety of issues.

“topic”应为复数“topics”，与“a variety of”搭配时需用复数名词。