News— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'yeah' and 'yes'. Use correct verb forms like 'watch' instead of 'watching' after 'I just'. Also, avoid filler words like 'I, I' and unclear phrases like 'And what?'. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details within 4-5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I am interested in news. Every morning, I start my day by watching the news on TV. Sometimes, I also check news apps on my phone to stay updated. It helps me keep informed about current events around the world.

Sugestão: Your answer contains many hesitations and repetitions which affect fluency. Try to speak more smoothly and avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated words. Also, use correct verb forms and sentence structures. Use linking words such as 'however' or 'when' to connect ideas clearly. Keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Exemplo: I usually watch the news on television. However, when I am short of time, I check news apps on my phone and read the headlines. This way, I can quickly get information from around the world.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using more natural expressions and better sentence structure. Avoid repeating words like 'it it's'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'so' effectively. Also, try to be more specific about why you dislike the job and what your current job is like.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because it involves a hectic schedule with irregular hours. You have to be available day and night, which I find stressful. I prefer my current job, which has regular daytime hours and suits me better.

Sugestão: Your answer provides relevant content but contains hesitations and some unclear phrasing. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and phrases like 'came to know like'. Use more precise vocabulary such as 'unfortunate' instead of 'pathetic' when referring to events. Also, try to explain your opinion more clearly and logically with linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I read the headlines this morning. I learned about the conflict between Israel and Iran, which I find very unfortunate. It seems that the leaders are harming their own people for their own benefit, which is quite sad.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated words such as 'talk, talk'. Use clearer linking phrases like 'when I find something important' instead of 'when I realize like'. Also, try to be more concise and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: I don't often talk about the news with my friends, but when I find something important, I call them to discuss it. For example, last week I heard some news about a celebrity, and we talked about it in detail for about half an hour.

× Every morning when I wake up, I just turn on my TV and watching the news.

✓ Every morning when I wake up, I just turn on my TV and watch the news.

After the conjunction 'and', the verb should be in the base form 'watch' to maintain parallel structure with 'turn'. Using 'watching' here is incorrect because it creates a non-parallel verb form.

× I, I, it's the first thing I start my day with listening the news.

✓ I, I, it's the first thing I start my day with: listening to the news.

The phrase 'start my day with listening the news' requires the preposition 'to' after 'listening' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'listening' is correct here as a gerund after the preposition 'with'.

× Most of the time I watch, watching the news on, uh, television, but uh, when I have, uh, when, when I don't have, uh, that much time, then I just, uh, open the apps on my telephone and I'm, I'm just reading the headlines for the day so it can, gives me the information all around the globe mainly.

✓ Most of the time I watch the news on television, but when I don't have that much time, then I just open the apps on my telephone and I'm just reading the headlines for the day so it can give me information from all around the globe mainly.

The phrase 'I watch, watching the news' is incorrect; it should be 'I watch the news' to avoid redundancy and incorrect verb form. Also, 'gives' should be 'give' because the subject 'it' refers to 'it can give', where 'can' is a modal verb followed by the base form 'give'.

× so it can, gives me the information all around the globe mainly.

✓ so it can give me information from all around the globe mainly.

After the modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'gives' is incorrect and should be 'give'.

× I remember last week I got a news about a celebrity, so I just called my friend and uh, we just talk, talk about it around half an hour.

✓ I remember last week I got some news about a celebrity, so I just called my friend and we just talked about it for around half an hour.

The phrase 'we just talk, talk about it' is incorrect; it should be 'we just talked about it' to use the past tense matching the time frame. Also, 'a news' is incorrect because 'news' is uncountable; 'some news' is correct. Additionally, 'around half an hour' should be preceded by 'for' to indicate duration.