News— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は内容が豊富ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。例えば、「science or technologies」より「science and technology」が自然です。また、「because I am a journalist and I have to stay informed about the main information, so I always check...」は接続詞の使い方が不自然です。より簡潔で自然な表現を心がけ、文を5文以内にまとめましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I am very interested in news, especially about social issues, politics, and science and technology. As a journalist, I need to stay well-informed, so I regularly read several newspapers and watch TV programs to get the latest information.

Sugestão: 内容は伝わりますが、文法と語順の誤りがあり、自然な英語表現に改善が必要です。例えば、「some smartphone apps made by newspaper company and news agency not only in Japan but also the US is very convenient」は主語と動詞の一致が不適切です。接続詞や冠詞の使い方も見直しましょう。

Exemplo: I usually use smartphone apps to find news. Especially, apps developed by newspaper companies and news agencies in both Japan and the US are very convenient.

Sugestão: 話し言葉の「あいまいな表現」や文法の誤りが目立ちます。例えば、「wanna」や「あいまいな間投詞」はフォーマルな場面では避けましょう。また、「the most difficulties that we face is」は主語と動詞の一致が誤っています。より正確で自然な表現を心がけてください。

Exemplo: Yes, I am currently working as a journalist and I want to continue in this profession for as long as possible. However, one of the biggest challenges we face is dealing with artificial intelligence, which can write fluent Japanese sentences similar to humans.

Sugestão: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「I founded some articles」は「I found some articles」が正しいです。また、「illustrates a lot」は不自然なので、具体的に何が興味深いのか説明しましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I read three or four Japanese newspapers this morning. I found some articles that explain the situation of the tariff war between the US and China. I found it interesting because they provide detailed information about the impact on both countries.

Sugestão: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。例えば、「after I grow up as a adult」は時制と表現が不自然です。また、「new searches for affairs of politics」は意味が不明瞭です。より簡潔で正確な表現を使いましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, especially since I became an adult, I often discuss political news with my friends. I am particularly interested in the diplomacy of the Trump administration and enjoy sharing my opinions with others.

× I read 3 or 4 newspapers in Japan and I founded some articles that illustrates the situation of tariff wars between the US and China.

✓ I read 3 or 4 newspapers in Japan and I found some articles that illustrate the situation of tariff wars between the US and China.

The verb 'founded' is incorrect here; the correct past tense verb is 'found' (ID 5: Past tense issue). Also, 'illustrates' should be 'illustrate' to agree with the plural noun 'articles' (ID 27: Subject-verb agreement errors).

× I founded some articles that illustrates the situation of tariff wars between the US and China.

✓ I found some articles that illustrate the situation of tariff wars between the US and China.

The verb 'founded' is incorrect; the past tense of 'find' is 'found'. 'Founded' means to establish something, which is not the intended meaning here (ID 5: Past tense issue).

× I founded some articles that illustrates the situation of tariff wars between the US and China.

✓ I found some articles that illustrate the situation of tariff wars between the US and China.

The relative clause verb 'illustrates' should be plural 'illustrate' to agree with the plural noun 'articles' (ID 27: Subject-verb agreement errors).

× I talk it with everyone.

✓ I talk about it with everyone.

The verb 'talk' requires the preposition 'about' when referring to a topic. Also, 'it' should be preceded by 'about' to correctly express the idea of discussing something (ID 12: Incorrect use of pronouns).

× I talk it with everyone.

✓ I talk about it with everyone.

The verb 'talk' needs the preposition 'about' to indicate the topic of discussion. Omitting 'about' causes incorrect sentence structure (ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions).

× I always talk a lot about new searches for affairs of politics, especially I'm interested in diplomacy of Trump administration and I talk it with everyone.

✓ I always talk a lot about news related to political affairs, especially since I'm interested in the diplomacy of the Trump administration, and I talk about it with everyone.

The phrase 'new searches for affairs of politics' is incorrect; 'news related to political affairs' is appropriate. Also, 'diplomacy of Trump administration' needs the definite article 'the' before 'Trump administration' (ID 14: Incorrect use of quantifiers, ID 17: Incorrect use of the definite article).

× especially I'm interested in diplomacy of Trump administration

✓ especially I'm interested in the diplomacy of the Trump administration

The definite article 'the' is required before 'Trump administration' and 'diplomacy' to specify the particular administration and its diplomacy (ID 17: Incorrect use of the definite article).

× But the most difficulties that we face is how to deal with the artificial intelligence, which can write similar fluent Japanese sentence.

✓ But the most difficult problem that we face is how to deal with artificial intelligence, which can write similarly fluent Japanese sentences.

'Difficulties' is plural, so 'is' should be 'are' or better to use singular 'problem' with 'is'. Also, 'artificial intelligence' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. 'Similar fluent Japanese sentence' should be plural 'sentences' and 'similar' should be 'similarly' as an adverb modifying 'fluent' (ID 1: Singular and plural issue, ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, ID 17: Incorrect use of the definite article).

× which can write similar fluent Japanese sentence.

✓ which can write similarly fluent Japanese sentences.

'Similar' should be the adverb 'similarly' to modify 'fluent'. Also, 'sentence' should be plural 'sentences' to match the context (ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, ID 1: Singular and plural issue).

× I usually use my smartphone apps to search for news. Especially some smartphone apps made by newspaper company and news agency not only in Japan but also the US is very convenient.

✓ I usually use my smartphone apps to search for news. Especially, some smartphone apps made by newspaper companies and news agencies not only in Japan but also in the US are very convenient.

'Newspaper company' and 'news agency' should be plural to match 'some apps'. Also, 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural subject. 'In the US' needs the preposition 'in' (ID 1: Singular and plural issue, ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 27: Subject-verb agreement errors).

× not only in Japan but also the US is very convenient.

✓ not only in Japan but also in the US are very convenient.

The preposition 'in' is missing before 'the US'. Also, the verb should be plural 'are' to agree with plural subject 'apps' (ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 27: Subject-verb agreement errors).

× the most difficulties that we face is how to deal with the artificial intelligence

✓ the most difficult difficulties that we face are how to deal with artificial intelligence

'Most difficulties' is awkward; 'most difficult difficulties' or better 'the biggest difficulty' is more natural. Also, 'difficulties' is plural, so verb should be 'are'. 'The' before 'artificial intelligence' is unnecessary (ID 1: Singular and plural issue, ID 17: Incorrect use of the definite article).

× the most difficulties that we face is how to deal with the artificial intelligence

✓ the biggest difficulty that we face is how to deal with artificial intelligence

Using 'the biggest difficulty' is more natural than 'the most difficulties'. Also, 'artificial intelligence' is uncountable and does not need 'the' (ID 14: Incorrect use of quantifiers, ID 17: Incorrect use of the definite article).

× I wanna, uh, keep working on this profession as long as possible.

✓ I want to keep working in this profession as long as possible.

'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech. 'On this profession' should be 'in this profession'. 'As long as possible' is correct (ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions).

× keep working on this profession as long as possible.

✓ keep working in this profession as long as possible.

'Work in a profession' is the correct collocation, not 'work on a profession' (ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions).

× the most difficulties that we face is how to deal with the artificial intelligence

✓ the most difficult problem that we face is how to deal with artificial intelligence

'Most difficulties' is incorrect; 'most difficult problem' is better. Also, 'artificial intelligence' is uncountable and does not need 'the' (ID 14: Incorrect use of quantifiers, ID 17: Incorrect use of the definite article).

× I read 3 or 4 newspapers in Japan and I founded some articles that illustrates the situation of tariff wars between the US and China.

✓ I read 3 or 4 newspapers in Japan and I found some articles that illustrate the situation of tariff wars between the US and China.

The verb 'founded' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'found'. Also, 'illustrates' should be 'illustrate' to agree with plural 'articles' (ID 5: Past tense issue, ID 27: Subject-verb agreement errors).

× I always talk a lot about new searches for affairs of politics, especially I'm interested in diplomacy of Trump administration and I talk it with everyone.

✓ I always talk a lot about news related to political affairs, especially since I'm interested in the diplomacy of the Trump administration, and I talk about it with everyone.

'New searches for affairs of politics' is incorrect; 'news related to political affairs' is appropriate. Also, 'diplomacy of Trump administration' needs 'the' before 'Trump administration'. 'Talk it' should be 'talk about it' (ID 14: Incorrect use of quantifiers, ID 17: Incorrect use of the definite article, ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions).