News— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your interest and reasons. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I am definitely interested in news because it helps me stay updated about current affairs around the world and increases my knowledge.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but fragmented and lacks fluency. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, be more specific about the websites or types of news you prefer.

Exemplo: I usually find news by browsing various websites. For example, I open the Safari app on my iPhone and use Google to search for the latest news happening around the world.

Sugestão: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use complete sentences and link your ideas logically. Also, provide clearer examples to support your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. I would like to be a journalist because it would give me the opportunity to explore different parts of the world and visit various countries. For example, I could cover international sports events.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to explain your reason logically.

Exemplo: No, I didn't read the news this morning because I was very stressed about my exam, which is my third attempt. Therefore, I couldn't focus on anything else.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect them. Also, be more specific about why you don't discuss news with your friends.

Exemplo: No, I don't often talk with my friends about the news because we live in different places and rarely find time to connect. When we do, we usually discuss our personal lives instead.

× Yes, definitely I'm allowed to know about the news that it get and it help us to know what is happening in the world, what are the current affairs and moreover it has. Help us in increase our knowledge, uh.

✓ Yes, definitely I'm allowed to know about the news that it gets and it helps us to know what is happening in the world, what the current affairs are and moreover it helps us to increase our knowledge.

The verbs 'get' and 'help' need to be in the third person singular present tense 'gets' and 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'news'. Also, 'help us in increase' is incorrect; it should be 'helps us to increase' to use the correct infinitive form after 'help'.

× I usually explore news from the. Various websites.

✓ I usually explore news from various websites.

The period after 'the' is incorrect and breaks the sentence. Also, 'from the various websites' is acceptable but 'from various websites' is more natural here. The preposition 'from' is correctly used to indicate the source.

× I simply open my Safari app on the iPhone and then. Go to Google to search about the news, what is happening in this world and all those.

✓ I simply open my Safari app on the iPhone and then go to Google to search for the news about what is happening in this world and all that.

The period after 'then' incorrectly splits the sentence. Also, 'search about the news' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'search for the news'. 'All those' is vague and should be 'all that' to refer to general things.

× Yes, definitely. I love to be a journalist as it gave me a chance to, uh, explore the various. Areas of this world, I will get a chance to visit different countries.

✓ Yes, definitely. I love to be a journalist as it gives me a chance to, uh, explore the various areas of this world. I will get a chance to visit different countries.

The verb 'gave' is past tense but the context is present/future, so it should be 'gives' to match the present tense. Also, the period after 'various' incorrectly splits the sentence.

× For example, covering up the news of sports party.

✓ For example, covering the news of sports events.

The phrase 'covering up the news' is incorrect; 'covering the news' is correct. Also, 'sports party' is unclear; 'sports events' is more appropriate.

× No, I didn't read any news this morning because I was very stressed about my exam because this is the third attempt I'm doing.

✓ No, I didn't read any news this morning because I was very stressed about my exam since this is the third attempt I'm making.

The phrase 'this is the third attempt I'm doing' is awkward; 'I'm making' is more natural. Also, 'because' is repeated unnecessarily; replacing the second 'because' with 'since' improves clarity.

× So I can't able to focus on anything except miles.

✓ So I can't focus on anything except my studies.

'Can't able to' is incorrect; 'can't' or 'am not able to' should be used. Also, 'except miles' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error; 'my studies' fits the context better.

× No, I don't often talk with my friends about any news because. Live in a crowd in my friends, live in my. Country so we hardly get a time to connect with each other and when we connect we talk about our personal life, what is going in her life, in my. That's all.

✓ No, I don't often talk with my friends about any news because my friends live in a crowd in my country, so we hardly get time to connect with each other. When we connect, we talk about our personal lives, what is going on in their lives and in mine. That's all.

The sentence has several errors: 'Live in a crowd in my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'my friends live in a crowd in my country'. 'Get a time' should be 'get time'. 'What is going in her life, in my' should be 'what is going on in their lives and in mine' to use correct prepositions and pronouns.