News— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be more natural by using plural form 'newspapers' and avoiding redundancy like 'quite interested' and 'enjoy reading newspaper'. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I am interested in news. I usually read newspapers like The Hindu and The Tribune because they provide detailed and accurate information about my country. Additionally, I watch news channels to stay well informed.

Sugestão: Try to use plural 'newspapers' and add linking words like 'besides' or 'also' to make your answer more coherent. Also, correct 'explore articles Internet' to 'explore articles on the Internet'.

Exemplo: I usually read newspapers early in the morning, so most of my information comes from them. Besides that, I also watch news channels and explore articles on the Internet.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be improved by adding linking words like 'however' and correcting 'quite fulfilling and impactful career' to 'a quite fulfilling and impactful career'. Also, try to avoid starting with 'Well'.

Exemplo: I have never thought about journalism as a profession; however, if I ever get an opportunity, I would love to pursue it because I feel it is a quite fulfilling and impactful career.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to structure your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid grammatical errors and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I read The Hindu this morning as part of my routine. I came across some important updates: firstly, the government has decided to introduce artificial intelligence into Kerala's education curriculum; secondly, new policies are being launched to improve the economy.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by adding linking words and correcting minor grammar errors like 'in park' to 'in the park'. Also, try to be more specific about the topics discussed.

Exemplo: Yes, in the evening when we meet in the park to relax, we often have interesting and meaningful conversations about current news updates, such as politics and social issues.

× I enjoy reading newspaper, especially The Hindu and the Tribune because it provides me with detailed and accurate information about my country.

✓ I enjoy reading newspapers, especially The Hindu and the Tribune because they provide me with detailed and accurate information about my country.

The word 'newspaper' should be plural 'newspapers' because the student refers to more than one newspaper. Also, the verb 'provides' should be 'provide' to agree with the plural subject 'newspapers'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× I have a routine of reading newspaper early in the morning, so most of the information I get from the newspapers.

✓ I have a routine of reading newspapers early in the morning, so most of the information I get is from the newspapers.

'Newspaper' should be plural 'newspapers' to indicate multiple newspapers. Also, the sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'get' to be grammatically correct. This is a singular and plural issue and sentence structure issue.

× However, I also watch news channels and explore articles Internet.

✓ However, I also watch news channels and explore articles on the Internet.

The preposition 'on' is required before 'the Internet' to indicate where the articles are explored. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.

× if I ever get an opportunity i would love to pursue it because I feel that being a journalist is quite fulfilling and impactful career.

✓ if I ever get an opportunity I would love to pursue it because I feel that being a journalist is quite a fulfilling and impactful career.

The noun 'career' is singular and requires the article 'a' before it. Also, 'i' should be capitalized to 'I'. This is an article error and singular/plural issue.

× Yes, as part of my usual routine, I read the newspaper that is the Hindu I came across to measure updates first read.

✓ Yes, as part of my usual routine, I read the newspaper, that is The Hindu. I came across some major updates on my first read.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper punctuation and structure. It needs to be split into two sentences and corrected for clarity. This is a sentence structure error.

× The government has decided to launch artificial intelligence in Kerala education curriculum.

✓ The government has decided to introduce artificial intelligence into the Kerala education curriculum.

The phrase 'launch artificial intelligence in Kerala education curriculum' is awkward. 'Introduce' and 'into' are more appropriate here. This is a sentence structure and preposition usage error.

× The second one was some policies are being launched by the.

✓ The second one was that some policies are being launched by the government.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the subject after 'by the'. Adding 'government' completes the sentence. This is a sentence structure error.

× Yes, in the evening when we meet each other in park to relax, we have an interesting and meaningful conversation about the current updates.

✓ Yes, in the evening when we meet each other in the park to relax, we have interesting and meaningful conversations about the current updates.

The phrase 'in park' requires the definite article 'the' to be correct. Also, 'conversation' should be plural 'conversations' to match the context. This is an article error and singular/plural issue.