News— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and could be more concise. For example, 'I really interested' should be 'I am really interested'. Also, avoid redundancy like 'the very relevant and important'—choose one adjective. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I am really interested in the news because it helps me stay informed about what's happening around me. For instance, I usually watch local news about our community and education topics every morning while having breakfast, as I find them very important.

Sugestão: Your answer is well-structured and clear, with good use of examples and linking words. To improve, try to vary your vocabulary a bit more, for example, instead of repeating 'news' multiple times, use synonyms like 'information' or 'updates'.

Exemplo: I usually get information through online platforms, especially news websites and social media like Facebook, because they provide real-time updates on various topics. For example, I often check these apps on my phone during breakfast to stay informed about current events and breaking updates.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there is a slight error with 'share opportunity information' which should be 'share important information'. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' or 'and' to connect your ideas more smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I'd like to be a journalist because it offers the opportunity to explore various topics and share important information with the public. I enjoy writing and researching, which are essential skills for journalism, and it also allows me to meet different people.

Sugestão: Your answer does not directly respond to the question about reading the news this morning. Instead, it repeats a previous answer about being a journalist and is incomplete. Make sure to answer the question directly and provide specific details about your news reading habits today.

Exemplo: Yes, I read the news this morning on my phone. I checked several articles about local events and international news to stay updated before starting my day.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear, relevant, and well-structured with good use of examples and linking words. To improve further, you could add a bit more specific detail about the environmental issue you discussed to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I often discuss the news with my friends, especially when major events happen locally and globally. For example, we recently talked about the environmental issue of plastic pollution and how it affects our community.

× Yes, I really interested in the news because it helps me stay informed about what's happening around me.

✓ Yes, I am really interested in the news because it helps me stay informed about what's happening around me.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense 'I am interested'. Without 'am', the sentence is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'I am really interested'. This is a present tense issue.

× I usually watch the news every morning while having breakfast, especially local news about our community and education topics which I find the very relevant and important.

✓ I usually watch the news every morning while having breakfast, especially local news about our community and education topics which I find very relevant and important.

The use of 'the' before 'very relevant and important' is incorrect because 'very relevant and important' are adjectives describing the topics in general, not specific ones. The definite article 'the' should be omitted here for correct adjective usage.

× I usually find the news through online platforms, especially news websites and social media like Facebook, because they provide real time updates on a wide range of topics.

✓ I usually find the news on online platforms, especially news websites and social media like Facebook, because they provide real-time updates on a wide range of topics.

The preposition 'through' is less appropriate here; 'on' is commonly used with platforms or websites. Also, 'real time' should be hyphenated as 'real-time' when used as an adjective. This correction improves preposition use and adjective form.

× I usually find the news through online platforms, especially news websites and social media like Facebook, because they provide real time updates on a wide range of topics.

✓ I usually find the news through online platforms, especially news websites and social media like Facebook, because they provide real-time updates on a wide range of topics.

'Real time' should be hyphenated as 'real-time' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. This is a common adjective usage rule in English.

× Yes, I'd like to be a journalist because it offers the opportunity to explore various topics and share opportunity information with the public.

✓ Yes, I'd like to be a journalist because it offers the opportunity to explore various topics and share valuable information with the public.

The phrase 'share opportunity information' is incorrect; 'opportunity' is a noun and does not correctly modify 'information' here. The intended meaning is likely 'valuable information'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives or noun modifiers, corrected here by replacing 'opportunity' with 'valuable'.

× Yes, I like to be a journalist because it offers the chance to investigate a wide range of topics and share valuable information with the public.

✓ Yes, I would like to be a journalist because it offers the chance to investigate a wide range of topics and share valuable information with the public.

The sentence uses 'I like to be' which is less appropriate in this context expressing a wish or desire. The modal 'would like' is more suitable for expressing a polite desire or intention. This is a sentence structure issue related to modal verb usage and expression of desire.

× Also, being a journalist would allow me to connect with.

✓ Also, being a journalist would allow me to connect with people.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly after 'connect with'. It requires an object to complete the meaning. Adding 'people' completes the sentence and clarifies the intended meaning. This is a sentence structure error.

× For instance, we recently discussed the environmental issue.

✓ For instance, we recently discussed the environmental issues.

The phrase 'the environmental issue' is too specific and singular, but the context suggests a general discussion about environmental problems. Using the plural 'issues' without 'the' is more appropriate here. This is an incorrect use of the definite article and singular/plural issue.