News— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“you news”应为“the news”，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子，直接表达兴趣并说明原因，避免冗余。

Exemplo: Yes, I am very interested in the news because it helps me understand what is happening around the world.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且内容重复。建议使用连贯的句子，明确说明通过手机获取新闻的方式，并避免重复。

Exemplo: I usually check news on my phone, especially sports updates like which football team won. I open news apps in the morning to stay informed.

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不准确，如“wanna”应避免口语化，“go to everywhere”应为“go everywhere”。建议使用更正式和准确的表达。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to be a journalist because I can travel everywhere to investigate events and learn about different cultures.

Sugestão: 回答中“Note”使用不当，句子结构不够自然。建议直接回答并说明原因，避免使用不必要的词汇。

Exemplo: No, I didn't read the news this morning because I was nervous about the field test.

Sugestão: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，且重复。建议简洁明了地说明与朋友讨论新闻的频率和场合，避免重复和错误。

Exemplo: Yes, I often talk with my friends about the news, especially when we have meals together. It helps us start interesting conversations.

× Yes, I am very interested in you news because by reading the news it can make me know what happens in the world.

✓ Yes, I am very interested in your news because by reading the news it can help me know what happens in the world.

这里的 'you news' 应该是 'your news'，因为需要使用物主代词来表示“你的新闻”。

× I usually find news on my phone like what I wanted to know which football team won in the morning.

✓ I usually find news on my phone, like when I want to know which football team won in the morning.

这里 'like what I wanted to know' 应该改为 'like when I want to know'，因为表达的是习惯性动作，时态应为一般现在时，且使用正确的连接词。

× I will immediately check out my phones and check out the store so I can get the news.

✓ I will immediately check my phone and check the store so I can get the news.

'phones' 应为单数 'phone'，因为通常指的是自己的手机；'check out' 在这里用法不当，应该用 'check'。

× Yes, I wanna be a journalist because I can go to everywhere to investigate the things happen to there and learn different cultures around the world.

✓ Yes, I want to be a journalist because I can go everywhere to investigate the things that happen there and learn different cultures around the world.

'go to everywhere' 应改为 'go everywhere'，'things happen to there' 应改为 'things that happen there'，去掉多余的介词并加上关系代词。

× Note I didn't read the news this morning because I was so nervous about the field test.

✓ No, I didn't read the news this morning because I was so nervous about the field test.

'Note' 应为 'No'，表示否定回答。

× This I always talk with my friends about the news like when we have some meals or paperwork it is so good.

✓ I always talk with my friends about the news, like when we have some meals or do paperwork; it is so good.

句首的 'This' 用法错误，应去掉；'paperwork' 前应加动词 'do'，使句子完整。

× So I will to start a conversation.

✓ So I will start a conversation.

'will' 后不加 'to'，'will' 是情态动词，后接动词原形。

× I always talk about the news with him.

✓ I always talk about the news with them.

前文提到的是 'friends'，复数，代词应使用 'them' 而非单数 'him'。