News— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I am very interested in news because I work as a journalist. My job involves collecting information from daily news and writing engaging articles. Therefore, I need strong reading and writing skills to perform well.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has some awkward phrasing and minor grammar mistakes. Try to use more natural expressions and link your ideas clearly. Also, be specific about how these apps help you find news.

Exemplo: I usually get news through smartphone apps because they are convenient and efficient. For instance, I use six or seven apps from different countries like the UK, US, China, and Japan to stay updated with global news.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and confidently. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for better coherence.

Exemplo: No, I would not like to be a journalist in the future because I believe that AI technology will create tough competition. Sometimes, AI can use language and write impressive articles better than humans.

Sugestão: Your answer provides good content but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct articles and word order, and link your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I read several Japanese newspapers this morning on my smartphone. I noticed that there might be the first female Japanese Prime Minister soon, which I found quite impressive and interesting.

Sugestão: Your answer is detailed but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I often discuss daily news topics like politics, science, and arts with my friends. Since they know I'm a journalist, they expect me to provide deeper insights, which I enjoy because it helps me clarify my own thoughts.

× Yes, I'm very interested in news because I'm a journalist, so I not only have to collect information through Daily News about also have to write several impressive and interesting articles.

✓ Yes, I'm very interested in news because I'm a journalist, so I not only have to collect information through Daily News but also have to write several impressive and interesting articles.

The phrase 'not only ... about also' is incorrect. The correct conjunction pair is 'not only ... but also' to connect two related actions or clauses. Using 'but also' after 'not only' properly links the two responsibilities.

× I usually correct information through smartphone apps because it is quite effective and easy to watch through smartphones and tablets.

✓ I usually collect information through smartphone apps because it is quite effective and easy to access through smartphones and tablets.

The verb 'correct' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is to gather or obtain information, so 'collect' is appropriate. Also, 'easy to watch' is not suitable for reading news; 'easy to access' or 'easy to read' fits better.

× For example, I have a six or seven smartphone apps from all over the world, such as apps in the UK, US, China and Japan.

✓ For example, I have six or seven smartphone apps from all over the world, such as apps in the UK, US, China and Japan.

The phrase 'a six or seven smartphone apps' is incorrect because 'a' is singular and cannot be used with plural 'apps'. The correct form omits 'a' when referring to multiple items.

× No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist in the future because the competition between AI is a quite, uh, harsh, uh, at that time.

✓ No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist in the future because the competition with AI will be quite harsh at that time.

The phrase 'wouldn't like to be' is acceptable but 'wouldn't like to be' is better replaced with 'would not want to be' for clarity. Also, 'between AI is a quite, uh, harsh' is ungrammatical; 'competition with AI will be quite harsh' correctly uses future tense and preposition.

× I think sometimes the ability of AI commanding our languages and writing impressive articles are will be over the humans.

✓ I think sometimes the ability of AI to command our languages and write impressive articles will be beyond that of humans.

The phrase 'ability of AI commanding' is incorrect; 'ability to command' is the correct infinitive form. Also, 'are will be over the humans' is ungrammatical; 'will be beyond that of humans' correctly expresses the intended meaning.

× Yes, I have read the several Japanese newspaper in this morning using my smartphone and I have noticed that there is a possibility of the birth of the first female Japanese Prime Minister in the near future.

✓ Yes, I have read several Japanese newspapers this morning using my smartphone and I have noticed that there is a possibility of the birth of the first female Japanese Prime Minister in the near future.

The phrase 'the several Japanese newspaper' is incorrect because 'several' is used with plural nouns without 'the'. Also, 'newspaper' should be plural 'newspapers' to match 'several'. 'In this morning' should be 'this morning' without 'in'.

× I found it is a quite impressive and interesting.

✓ I found it quite impressive and interesting.

The phrase 'a quite impressive' is incorrect because 'quite' is an adverb modifying adjectives and does not require an article 'a'. The correct form omits 'a'.

× Yes, I usually talk about the Daily News such as politics, science and arts with my friends because they know I'm a journalist and they want me to talk a lot about the Daily News and much more deeply than superficial information.

✓ Yes, I usually talk about the Daily News, such as politics, science and arts, with my friends because they know I'm a journalist and they want me to talk a lot about the Daily News and in much more depth than superficial information.

The phrase 'much more deeply' is awkward; 'in much more depth' is the correct expression when comparing the level of detail or understanding. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× And I love that time because I can make my thoughts much clearer.

✓ And I love that time because I can make my thoughts much clearer.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.