News— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated words such as 'I, I'. Also, make your answer more concise and natural by combining ideas smoothly and using appropriate vocabulary. For example, instead of 'keep an update about the changes and fluctuations', say 'stay updated on the daily stock market fluctuations'.

Exemplo: Yes, I'm quite interested in news because I like to stay updated on the daily fluctuations in the stock market. Therefore, I watch the news every day.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating phrases like 'watch news' multiple times. Use linking words to connect ideas and make your answer more coherent. Also, use more precise vocabulary such as 'catch up on the news' or 'follow news updates'.

Exemplo: Usually, I watch the news on television with my father since he enjoys it daily, and I join him. However, when I'm not at home, I catch up on news updates through YouTube.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler words like 'like' and ensure correct verb tenses. For example, explain why you are not interested and mention the skills required.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because it requires strong confidence and communication skills, which I feel I lack. Also, I am not very interested in this profession.

Sugestão: Good answer but try to avoid repeating 'this morning' twice. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' appropriately. Also, use more natural phrases such as 'I had to rush to the office' and 'I'll catch up on the news later'.

Exemplo: No, I didn't read the news this morning because I had to rush to the office. However, I'll catch up on it once I'm free.

Sugestão: Avoid grammatical errors such as 'discuss about' (should be 'discuss') and unclear phrases like 'if the commonest topic and of their interest'. Use linking words to organize your ideas and be more specific. For example, mention that you discuss news topics that interest you and your friends, such as the stock market and environmental changes.

Exemplo: Yes, my friends and I often discuss news topics that interest us. We usually talk about the stock market, environmental issues, and weather changes.

× I watch these news daily.

✓ I watch this news daily.

The word 'news' is an uncountable noun and should be treated as singular. Using 'these' implies plural, which is incorrect here. The correct determiner is 'this' for uncountable nouns.

× I just sit with him and watch news.

✓ I just sit with him and watch the news.

When referring to news in general, the definite article 'the' is used before 'news' to specify the content being watched.

× I read news via YouTube.

✓ I read the news via YouTube.

Similar to the previous correction, 'the' is needed before 'news' to indicate specific information being read.

× I think I have. I didn't have a skill set for being a journalist because it requires a lot of like confidence and communication skills, which I like usually, and I'm not really interested be a journalist.

✓ I think I don't have the skill set for being a journalist because it requires a lot of confidence and communication skills, which I usually don't have, and I'm not really interested in being a journalist.

The original sentence has fragmented and unclear structure. 'I think I have.' is incomplete. 'I didn't have' should be present tense 'I don't have' to match the current context. 'like' is incorrectly used instead of 'don't have'. Also, 'interested be a journalist' should be 'interested in being a journalist' to use the correct preposition and gerund form.

× I have to rush to office and therefore I just missed news this morning.

✓ I had to rush to the office and therefore I just missed the news this morning.

Since the action happened in the past, 'have' should be 'had'. Also, 'office' requires the definite article 'the'. 'news' should be preceded by 'the' as it refers to specific news.

× We often discuss about the news if the commonest topic and of their interest and they usually discuss with me about stock market and changes in environment and weather changes.

✓ We often discuss the news if it is a common topic and of their interest, and they usually discuss with me the stock market and changes in the environment and weather changes.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'commonest' is incorrect here; 'common' is appropriate. 'Changes in environment' needs the definite article 'the' before 'environment'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.