Sharing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear words. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary. For example, say 'Yes, my parents encouraged me to share because they believe sharing is caring.'

Exemplo: Yes, my parents encouraged me to share because they believe sharing is caring.

Sugestão: Your answer is short and has unclear words. Use complete sentences and clarify what 'Tiffin Ann' means. For example, say 'I usually share my notebook and my lunch box with my friends.'

Exemplo: I usually share my notebook and my lunch box with my friends.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by avoiding repetition and adding linking words. For example, say 'Actually, I prefer to share everything because my parents taught me that sharing is caring.'

Exemplo: Actually, I prefer to share everything because my parents taught me that sharing is caring.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear words. Use correct sentence structure and vocabulary. For example, say 'I don't think more people will share cars because cars are expensive and many people prefer to keep their belongings to themselves.'

Exemplo: I don't think more people will share cars because cars are expensive and many people prefer to keep their belongings to themselves.

× Yes, my parents encourage you to see are because they think searing is curing.

✓ Yes, my parents encourage me to share because they think sharing is caring.

The student incorrectly used 'you' instead of 'me' and 'see are' instead of 'share'. The pronoun should refer to the speaker ('me'), and the verb 'share' was misspelled and misused. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, my parents encourage you to see are because they think searing is curing.

✓ Yes, my parents encourage me to share because they think sharing is caring.

The phrase 'searing is curing' is a misspelling of the idiom 'sharing is caring'. Correcting the spelling and word choice is necessary for proper meaning and grammar.

× I usually share my notebook, my Tiffin Ann.

✓ I usually share my notebook and my tiffin.

The phrase 'Tiffin Ann' is incorrect; likely the student meant 'tiffin' (a lunchbox). Also, 'my notebook, my Tiffin Ann' is awkward; using 'and' is appropriate to list items. Correcting the noun and conjunction improves clarity.

× I think no, because many, many more people do not share their things and carries is expensive things, so I do not think that people will share cars.

✓ I don't think so, because many more people do not share their things and cars are expensive, so I do not think that people will share cars.

The phrase 'I think no' is incorrect; 'I don't think so' is the proper expression. 'Carries' is a misspelling of 'cars'. Also, 'cars is expensive things' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'cars are expensive'. Correcting pronouns, verb forms, and plural nouns is necessary.