Sharing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'kith and cane'. Also, aim for more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structure to improve naturalness and effectiveness. For example, replace vague terms with specific ones and reduce redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, my parents always encouraged me to share my belongings and memories because it helps build a strong connection. Whenever I express my emotions or feelings to close friends, it creates positive vibes.

Sugestão: Clarify your answer by directly addressing the question and avoid repetition like 'share my share dishes'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples to enrich your response.

Exemplo: I usually share food with my friends, especially dishes I have tried recently. For instance, if I cook a new recipe, I like to offer some so they can taste different flavours.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, be more specific about why you prefer not to share these items.

Exemplo: Yes, I prefer not to share personal items such as clothes and gadgets because they are intimate and often used daily. Sharing them might be uncomfortable or unhygienic.

Sugestão: Use more precise vocabulary and avoid repeating words like 'also'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'therefore' to make your answer more coherent. Additionally, provide a clearer explanation of benefits.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe more people will share cars in the future because carpooling reduces traffic congestion and pollution. Furthermore, it encourages social interaction among commuters, making it a practical and friendly option.

× And whenever I share my emotions or my feelings with my uh, with my kith and cane, it always gives me a positive vibes.

✓ And whenever I share my emotions or my feelings with my uh, with my kith and kin, it always gives me positive vibes.

The phrase 'a positive vibes' is incorrect because 'vibes' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, 'kith and cane' is a mispronunciation of 'kith and kin'. The correct phrase is 'kith and kin', meaning friends and family. Therefore, 'a positive vibes' should be corrected to 'positive vibes' and 'kith and cane' to 'kith and kin'.

× Well, it depends on my mood what thing I have to share with my kids and kids.

✓ Well, it depends on my mood what things I have to share with my kids.

The phrase 'what thing' is incorrect because 'thing' should be plural to match the context, so it should be 'what things'. Also, 'my kids and kids' is redundant; 'my kids' suffices. Therefore, the sentence is corrected to 'what things I have to share with my kids'.

× But usually I always share my share dishes with them so that they can try different dishes.

✓ But usually I always share my dishes with them so that they can try different dishes.

The phrase 'my share dishes' is incorrect; 'share' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'my dishes'. This correction removes redundancy and clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I think personal things we cannot share with others like our personal clothes and personal gadgets.

✓ Yes, I think personal things we cannot share with others like our personal clothes and personal gadgets.

This sentence is grammatically correct in terms of singular and plural usage; no correction needed here.

× So these kind of things I think we are not, we don't have to share with other peoples.

✓ So these kinds of things I think we are not, we don't have to share with other people.

The phrase 'these kind of things' should be 'these kinds of things' because 'these' is plural and must agree with the plural noun 'kinds'. Also, 'other peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is already plural and does not take an 's'. Therefore, it should be 'other people'.

× Yes, I think more people will share car in the future because it's a very friendly idea and it will also reduce the traffic congestion on the roads and also it will help to create connection in between people.

✓ Yes, I think more people will share cars in the future because it's a very friendly idea and it will also reduce the traffic congestion on the roads and also it will help to create connections between people.

The phrase 'share car' should be 'share cars' to match plural usage since 'more people' implies multiple cars. Also, 'create connection' should be 'create connections' to indicate multiple social connections. The phrase 'in between people' is better expressed as 'between people'.

× So I think it's a best idea to go for carpooling.

✓ So I think it's the best idea to go for carpooling.

The phrase 'a best idea' is incorrect because 'best' is a superlative adjective and requires the definite article 'the'. Therefore, it should be 'the best idea'.