Sharing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, my parents always encouraged me to share food and clothing with close friends and anyone in need because it creates a sense of community and kindness.

Sugestão: Your answer is too long and somewhat confusing due to grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use proper grammar, and avoid unnecessary repetition. Limit your answer to about 4-5 sentences.

Exemplo: I usually share notebooks and food with my friends. Sometimes, we also share clothes and makeup products. Additionally, we often share our thoughts and have friendly conversations.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid unnecessary questions within your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I prefer not to share certain things like my secrets and future plans except with my family because they are very personal.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I think more people will share cars in the future because it helps reduce traffic congestion and promotes environmental friendliness.

× Yes, of course our parents encourage us to share food and clothing with our close one and also if someone who needed those things, we share them.

✓ Yes, of course our parents encourage us to share food and clothing with our close ones and also if someone needs those things, we share them.

The phrase 'our close one' should be plural 'our close ones' to match the context (plural people). Also, 'if someone who needed' is incorrect; it should be 'if someone needs' to maintain present tense and correct verb form for the subject 'someone'. This is a subject-verb agreement and tense consistency issue.

× It's such a beautiful feeling when we share our stuff to some.

✓ It's such a beautiful feeling when we share our stuff with someone.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to use with 'share' is 'with'. Also, 'some' is incomplete; it should be 'someone' to refer to a person.

× We usually share with my friends is our notebooks and we share our food as well as we share our clothes also and even we are share our makeups and we also share our thoughts and gossip law all and ours.

✓ What we usually share with my friends are our notebooks, and we share our food as well as our clothes. We even share our makeup, and we also share our thoughts and gossip, all of ours.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'We usually share with my friends is our notebooks' is incorrect; it should be 'What we usually share with my friends are our notebooks' to match subject-verb agreement and sentence structure. 'We are share' is incorrect; it should be 'we share'. 'Makeups' should be 'makeup' as an uncountable noun. The phrase 'gossip law all and ours' is unclear and corrected to 'gossip, all of ours' for clarity. These are subject-verb agreement, sentence structure, and incorrect word form issues.

× Is there is a few thing which I prefer to not say to anyone expect my family? Is that our secrets and our future plans?

✓ There are a few things which I prefer not to say to anyone except my family. These are our secrets and our future plans.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and grammar: 'Is there is' is incorrect; it should be 'There are'. 'A few thing' should be plural 'a few things'. 'Prefer to not say' is better as 'prefer not to say'. 'Expect' is a misspelling of 'except'. The second sentence is a fragment and should be combined or rephrased. These are sentence structure and subject-verb agreement errors.

× Is of course, everyone helps each other and if their friends want to borrow their cars, they share them and it's also helpful for traffic and it's good for to.

✓ Yes, of course, everyone helps each other, and if their friends want to borrow their cars, they share them. It's also helpful for traffic, and it's good too.

'Is of course' is incorrect; it should be 'Yes, of course'. The sentence is a run-on and needs proper punctuation. 'It's good for to' is incorrect; it should be 'it's good too'. These are modal verb usage and sentence structure issues.