Sharing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答较为直接且内容相关，但语言表达稍显简单，且“close our relationship”表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，如“strengthen our relationships”，并注意语法细节。

Exemplo: Yes, my parents always taught me to share with others when I was a child. They encouraged me to share fruits, snacks, and toys with elderly people and my friends because sharing is a valuable tradition in China that helps strengthen our relationships.

Sugestão: 回答内容丰富，但存在语法错误，如“be beautiful pictures”应为“beautiful pictures”，以及“creative new friendship”应为“create new friendships”。建议注意动词形式和复数形式的正确使用。

Exemplo: I like to share many things such as delicious snacks and interesting news. I often send interesting videos and beautiful pictures to my friends and family on social media because I think it's a good way to strengthen our relationships and create new friendships.

Sugestão: 回答表达有语法错误，如“earphone”应为“earphones”，“may be broke”应为“may break”。建议使用更准确的词汇和语法结构，提升表达的准确性和自然度。

Exemplo: I think personal items like earphones and clothes are not suitable for sharing because it's unhygienic. Also, expensive things such as cameras and cars shouldn't be shared as it might damage our relationships.

Sugestão: 回答内容具体，但存在语法错误，如“get up”应为“got up”或“have been getting up”。建议注意时态一致性，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, recently I shared my daily routine with my friend. I have changed my bad habits and have been getting up early every day. This helps me keep a clear mind during study and work, and gives me enough energy to exercise.

Sugestão: 回答内容完整，但存在主谓一致错误，如“which make me”应为“which makes me”，以及“make me happy”应为“makes me happy”。建议注意主谓一致和动词形式。

Exemplo: The first person I would like to share good news with is my mom. She plays an important role in my life. She always gives me encouragement and supports my decisions, which makes me feel confident. Sharing good news with her not only makes me happy but also strengthens our relationship.

Sugestão: 回答较好，内容具体且表达清晰。建议将“friend”改为复数“friends”，并适当使用更多连接词使表达更自然。

Exemplo: I really enjoy sharing interesting and funny videos and beautiful pictures with my friends on social media, especially on TikTok. We chat almost every day, which not only makes us happy but also strengthens our relationships. I think it's a great way to relax.

× They encouraged me to share fruits, snacks and toys to elder people and my friends.

✓ They encouraged me to share fruits, snacks and toys with elderly people and my friends.

这里“elder people”应改为“elderly people”，表示“老人”，且介词应为“with”而非“to”，表示“与……分享”。

× They encouraged me to share fruits, snacks and toys to elder people and my friends.

✓ They encouraged me to share fruits, snacks and toys with elderly people and my friends.

动词“share”后应接介词“with”表示“与……分享”，而不是“to”。

× I always send interesting videos and be beautiful pictures with my friends and family on social media.

✓ I always send interesting videos and beautiful pictures to my friends and family on social media.

动词“send”后应接介词“to”表示“发送给……”，且“be beautiful pictures”中“be”多余，应去掉。

× I always send interesting videos and be beautiful pictures with my friends and family on social media.

✓ I always send interesting videos and beautiful pictures to my friends and family on social media.

“be beautiful pictures”中“be”用法错误，应直接用形容词“beautiful”修饰“pictures”。

× I think it's a good way to strengthen our relationship and creative new friendship.

✓ I think it's a good way to strengthen our relationship and create new friendships.

“creative”是形容词，句中应使用动词“create”表示“创造”，且“friendship”应用复数形式“friendships”。

× I think personal stuff is not suitable to share like earphone and clothes.

✓ I think personal stuff is not suitable to share like earphones and clothes.

“earphone”应使用复数形式“earphones”，因为通常指一对耳机。

× I think personal stuff is not suitable to share like earphone and clothes.

✓ I think personal stuff is not suitable to share, like earphones and clothes.

在“share”和“like”之间应加逗号，表示举例说明。

× I think expensive stuff is also not suitable to share like camera and car.

✓ I think expensive stuff is also not suitable to share, like cameras and cars.

“camera”和“car”应使用复数形式“cameras”和“cars”，表示泛指。

× It may be broke our relationship.

✓ It may break our relationship.

“may be broke”时态错误，应使用“may break”表示可能破坏关系。

× I changed my bad habits and get up early every day.

✓ I changed my bad habits and got up early every day.

前半句为过去时，后半句“get”应改为过去式“got”保持时态一致。

× It helps me keep a clear mind in study and work and full of energy to do some exercise.

✓ It helps me keep a clear mind in studying and working and be full of energy to do some exercise.

“in study and work”应改为“in studying and working”，动名词形式更合适；“and full of energy”前应加“be”使结构完整。

× She always gives me encouragement and supports my decision, which make me feel confident.

✓ She always gives me encouragement and supports my decision, which makes me feel confident.

关系代词“which”指代单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“makes”。

× Sharing good news with her not only make me happy but also strengthen our relationship.

✓ Sharing good news with her not only makes me happy but also strengthens our relationship.

主语“Sharing good news with her”为单数，谓语动词应加-s，分别为“makes”和“strengthens”。

× I really enjoy sharing interesting and funny videos and beautiful pictures with my friend on social media, especially on TikTok.

✓ I really enjoy sharing interesting and funny videos and beautiful pictures with my friends on social media, especially on TikTok.

“friend”应使用复数形式“friends”，表示多个朋友。

× It not only makes us happy, but it also strengthens our relationship.

✓ It not only makes us happy, but it also strengthens our relationship.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。