Sharing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够自然，表达不清晰，且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免使用不恰当或难以理解的词汇。

Exemplo: Yes, my parents taught me to share with others when I was a child because they believed it was important to be kind and generous.

Sugestão: 回答内容混乱，表达不连贯，缺乏具体细节。建议使用清晰的句子结构，具体说明喜欢分享的物品，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: I like to share books and travel experiences with others because it helps us connect and learn from each other.

Sugestão: 表达不准确，句子结构混乱。建议直接回答问题，明确指出不适合分享的内容，并解释原因。

Exemplo: I believe private family matters should not be shared because they involve personal privacy and security concerns.

Sugestão: 回答中断且不连贯，表达不清晰。建议完整表达想分享的内容，避免重复和语法错误。

Exemplo: Recently, I shared my published paper about my research on children's disorders with my colleagues to inform them about my findings.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明想分享好消息的人，并解释原因。

Exemplo: I would like to share good news with my mother first because she has always supported me and I trust her the most.

Sugestão: 表达较为简单，使用词汇不准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并丰富细节。

Exemplo: I usually share happy news with my friends because I want to spread my happiness and celebrate together.

× What stood out to me most from that experience was my parents emphasize that sharing was just unknown about being politicized.

✓ What stood out to me most from that experience was my parents emphasizing that sharing was just unknown about being politicized.

此处谓语动词后应使用现在分词形式作表语，表示动作的进行或状态，原句中使用了动词原形，语法错误。

× As for me, uh, moving cars, uh, travels, shine novels or books to others, we can then we can umm, connected each other afterwards.

✓ As for me, uh, moving cars, uh, travels, shining novels or books to others, we can then, umm, connect with each other afterwards.

动词后接介词或动词形式错误，'shine'应为现在分词'shining'修饰名词，'connected'应为动词原形'connect'，且需加介词'with'表示连接关系。

× From my own perspective, I think private family matters are not suitable for sharing eyes, electric security and privacy into account.

✓ From my own perspective, I think private family matters are not suitable for sharing, taking security and privacy into account.

短语搭配错误，'sharing eyes'无意义，应为'sharing'后加逗号，后半句应使用'taking ... into account'表示考虑安全和隐私。

× Yes Sir, I want to share my published paper about my research with others. I want to talk about my research on disorders in children. Oh, I want to. I want know my promise.

✓ Yes Sir, I want to share my published paper about my research with others. I want to talk about my research on disorders in children. Oh, I want to. I want to know my progress.

'I want know my promise'中缺少不定式to，且'promise'用词不当，应为'progress'表示进展。

× On this matter, I may see my mother because she is my best friend's uh from my childhood. I like to share everything with her.

✓ On this matter, I may see my mother because she is my best friend from my childhood. I like to share everything with her.

'best friend's'为所有格，后面缺少名词，且语境应为'best friend'，不应使用所有格。

× Oh, I want to share joyful news with my friends. I want to transport my happiness.

✓ Oh, I want to share joyful news with my friends. I want to express my happiness.

'transport'意为运输，不适用于表达情感，应使用'express'表示表达情感。