Sharing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: この回答は文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「selling」ではなく「sharing」を使うべきです。また、過去形の動詞の使い方に注意し、文を簡潔にまとめることが大切です。より自然な表現を心がけましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, my parents taught me to share when I was a child. They often encouraged me and my siblings to share food items like instant noodles, which helped us develop good sharing habits.

Sugestão: この回答は意味が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。例えば、「see her some fruits」は誤りで、「share some fruits」が正しいです。文を短くし、具体的な内容を明確に伝える練習をしましょう。

Exemplo: I like to share fruits and snacks with people around me because it makes me feel happy. Sometimes, I also share gifts with my friends on special occasions.

Sugestão: 回答は内容が理解できますが、発音や語彙の誤りが目立ちます。例えば、「fairy fairy」は不要で、「undercarment」は「underwear」が自然です。また、「communicable diseases to by using」は不自然なので、簡潔に言い換えましょう。

Exemplo: I think very personal items, such as underwear and towels, are not suitable for sharing because they can spread diseases.

Sugestão: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「save it to other」は誤りで、「lend it to others」が正しいです。文を簡潔にし、正しい表現を使う練習をしましょう。

Exemplo: Recently, I lent my personal laptop to a friend for work, but only for a short time because I need it back. I also shared some books with people who were interested.

Sugestão: この回答は文法的に不正確で、意味が不明瞭です。例えば、「my well research」は誤りで、「my role model」などが適切です。文を整理し、明確に伝える練習をしましょう。

Exemplo: I would like to share good news with my big brother because he is very special to me. He has been my mentor and has helped me a lot since childhood.

Sugestão: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、語彙の選択や文法に誤りがあります。例えば、「common beyond businesses and experts」は不自然で、「common interests in business and sports」が適切です。より自然な表現を使いましょう。

Exemplo: My friends and I share news about our common interests, such as sports and business. If I find any new or unique opinions about these topics, I like to discuss them with my friends.

× I remember they used to bought us a single food item such as instant noodle and makers to bite by ourselves with our siblings.

✓ I remember they used to buy us a single food item such as instant noodles and snacks to eat by ourselves with our siblings.

The phrase 'used to bought' is incorrect because 'used to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the past tense. Also, 'instant noodle' should be plural 'instant noodles' and 'makers' is unclear; 'snacks' is more appropriate. 'To bite' should be 'to eat' for natural English usage.

× Well, I like to see her some fruits and to everybody near me because I have such a habit like and like to share my food it it gives me very nice fives and good feeling.

✓ Well, I like to share some fruits with everybody near me because I have such a habit and like to share my food; it gives me very nice vibes and a good feeling.

The phrase 'see her some fruits' is incorrect; it should be 'share some fruits with'. The sentence also has redundant words and unclear expressions like 'it it gives me very nice fives' which should be 'it gives me very nice vibes'. Pronouns and expressions need correction for clarity and grammar.

× Or sometimes I like to share some gifts.

✓ Sometimes I also like to share some gifts.

Starting a sentence with 'Or' is incorrect here; it should be 'Sometimes I also like to share some gifts' to connect the idea properly.

× I think uh, fairy fairy personal items uh, such as undercarment and towel, they are not suitable for sharing because uh, people might share communicable diseases to by using.

✓ I think personal items, such as undergarments and towels, are not suitable for sharing because people might transmit communicable diseases by using them.

The word 'fairy' is incorrect; it should be 'fairly' or omitted. 'Undercarment' should be plural 'undergarments'. The phrase 'people might share communicable diseases to by using' is incorrect; it should be 'people might transmit communicable diseases by using them'. Also, 'they are' is redundant after listing items.

× Yes, I have my personal laptop, I could save it to other for their work purpose but for the limited time because I need it back to perform my work.

✓ Yes, I have my personal laptop; I can lend it to others for their work purposes but only for a limited time because I need it back to perform my work.

The modal verb 'could' is incorrectly used here; 'can' is more appropriate for present ability or permission. 'Save it to other' is incorrect; it should be 'lend it to others'. Also, 'work purpose' should be plural 'work purposes' and sentence structure needs improvement.

× On the other hand I had some books if someone is interested I can see it.

✓ On the other hand, I have some books; if someone is interested, I can lend them.

The past tense 'had' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to a current situation; 'have' is correct. 'See it' is incorrect; it should be 'lend them' referring to books. Also, punctuation is needed for clarity.

× To my Big Brother since he has very special place over my heart so I have to share any anything special.

✓ To my big brother, since he has a very special place in my heart, so I have to share anything special with him.

The preposition 'over' is incorrect; it should be 'in my heart'. 'Any anything' is redundant; 'anything' suffices. Also, 'Big Brother' should not be capitalized unless a proper noun. The sentence structure needs commas for clarity.

× News to him, he has been uh, my mentor and my well research since my childhood and had helped.

✓ I share news with him because he has been my mentor and well-researched guide since my childhood and has helped me.

The phrase 'my well research' is incorrect; it should be 'well-researched guide' or similar. 'Had helped' should be 'has helped' to maintain present perfect tense. Sentence structure is incomplete and needs correction.

× Well, me and my friends share our common beyond businesses and experts, so I'd like to share everything related to sports and businesses with them.

✓ Well, my friends and I share common interests beyond business and expertise, so I'd like to share everything related to sports and business with them.

The phrase 'me and my friends' is incorrect; the subject form 'my friends and I' is correct. 'Common beyond businesses and experts' is unclear; it should be 'common interests beyond business and expertise'. Also, 'businesses' should be singular 'business' for general reference.

× If I found anything new or unique opinion about those things, I would like to talk with them very much.

✓ If I find anything new or a unique opinion about those things, I would like to talk with them very much.

The conditional sentence requires present tense 'find' in the 'if' clause, not past tense 'found'. This is a first conditional structure talking about real possibilities.