Sharing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and 'I mean' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use clearer sentence structures and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'When I was a child, my parents taught me to share my belongings with friends, which helped me become kinder.'

Exemplo: When I was a child, my parents taught me to share my belongings with friends, which helped me become a kinder person.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar, such as 'I really enjoy sharing books and movies with my friends because it makes their leisure time more enjoyable.'

Exemplo: I really enjoy sharing books and movies with my friends because it makes their leisure time more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Try to speak more fluently by reducing hesitation and filler words. Use clearer and more concise sentences, for example: 'Items related to personal hygiene, such as toothbrushes and some clothes, should not be shared because of health concerns.'

Exemplo: Items related to personal hygiene, such as toothbrushes and some clothes, should not be shared because of health concerns.

Sugestão: Reduce excessive hesitation and filler words to improve fluency. Use past tense correctly and structure your answer clearly, for example: 'About a week ago, a friend asked to borrow my car, and I lent it to her. She returned it in perfect condition.'

Exemplo: About a week ago, a friend asked to borrow my car, and I lent it to her. She returned it in perfect condition.

Sugestão: Speak more confidently and avoid filler words. Use clearer expressions and linking words, for example: 'I would first share good news with my parents and close friends because I love involving them in my happiness, which helps strengthen our relationships.'

Exemplo: I would first share good news with my parents and close friends because I love involving them in my happiness, which helps strengthen our relationships.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly, for example: 'My close friends and I often share both good and bad news. This helps us discuss any difficulties we face and find solutions together.'

Exemplo: My close friends and I often share both good and bad news. This helps us discuss any difficulties we face and find solutions together.

× when I was child, I remember that, uh, my parents really put their efforts to, uh, teach me how to share my possessions and beloved, uh, items with other, uh, friends.

✓ when I was a child, I remember that, uh, my parents really put their efforts to, uh, teach me how to share my possessions and beloved, uh, items with other, uh, friends.

The phrase 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a' before the singular noun 'child'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article ('a' or 'the'). The correct phrase is 'when I was a child'.

× these kind of, uh, activities during my leisure time

✓ this kind of, uh, activities during my leisure time

The phrase 'these kind of' is incorrect because 'kind' is singular and should be preceded by 'this' instead of 'these'. The correct phrase is 'this kind of activities'. Alternatively, if plural is intended, it should be 'these kinds of activities'.

× I, uh, really enjoy to share them with my friends

✓ I, uh, really enjoy sharing them with my friends

The verb 'enjoy' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive. Therefore, 'enjoy to share' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoy sharing'.

× books or movies. Since I'm really interested in, uh, these kind of, uh, activities during my leisure time

✓ books or movies. Since I'm really interested in, uh, this kind of, uh, activities during my leisure time

Same as previous, 'these kind of' is incorrect because 'kind' is singular and should be preceded by 'this'. The correct phrase is 'this kind of activities'.

× some pair of, some, uh, part of clothes

✓ some pairs of, some, uh, parts of clothes

The phrase 'some pair of' is incorrect because 'pair' is singular and 'some' implies plural. It should be 'some pairs of'. Similarly, 'part of clothes' should be 'parts of clothes' to match plural usage.

× could not share, couldn't be shared with other people

✓ cannot be shared with other people

The phrase 'could not share' and 'couldn't be shared' is incorrect in this context because it refers to a general rule or fact. The correct modal verb is 'cannot' to express impossibility or prohibition.

× one of my friends, uh, asked me to, uh, uh, to lend my, uh, personal car and I, uh, and I, uh, share it with her

✓ one of my friends, uh, asked me to, uh, uh, lend my, uh, personal car and I, uh, shared it with her

The verb 'share' should be in past tense 'shared' to match the past action described by 'asked'. Also, 'to lend' does not need the extra 'to' before it.

× actually she returned it in a perfect position

✓ actually she returned it in perfect condition

The phrase 'in a perfect position' is awkward and incorrect when referring to returning a car. The correct phrase is 'in perfect condition'. This is a vocabulary correction rather than grammar, but it improves clarity.

× people who, uh, are really in, uh, who I really love to, uh, engage in my, uh, happiness

✓ people who, uh, are really the ones with whom I really love to, uh, share my, uh, happiness

The phrase 'engage in my happiness' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'share my happiness'. Also, 'people who are really in' is incomplete and unclear; it should be rephrased for clarity.

× my close friends and I, uh, often talk about every good news and bad news with each other

✓ my close friends and I, uh, often talk about every piece of good news and bad news with each other

The word 'news' is uncountable and should not be preceded by 'every' alone. Instead, use 'every piece of news' to correctly quantify uncountable nouns.

× try to solve it

✓ try to solve them

The pronoun 'it' refers to a singular noun, but 'difficulties' is plural. Therefore, the correct pronoun is 'them' to agree in number with 'difficulties'.