Sharing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は基本的な内容を含んでいますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「makes made people happy」は誤りで、「makes people happy」が正しいです。また、文が断片的で繋がりが弱いため、より自然で流暢な表現を心がけましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, my parents taught me to share when I was a child. For example, I often shared my snacks with my sisters because they believed sharing makes people happy.

Sugestão: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文法ミスや不自然な表現が多いです。例えば、「I like to watch that People are surprising」は不自然で、「I like to see people surprised」が適切です。接続詞の使い方も改善が必要です。より明確で自然な表現を目指しましょう。

Exemplo: I enjoy sharing my experiences with others. Since I am studying in France, many people have never been to Japan, so I like to see their surprise when I talk about Japanese culture.

Sugestão: 文法的な誤りが多く、意味がやや分かりにくいです。例えば、「answers of the exams were the assignments」は不自然で、「exam answers or assignments」が適切です。繰り返しや冗長な表現も避け、簡潔で明確な回答を心がけましょう。

Exemplo: I believe exam answers and assignments should not be shared because everyone should complete them on their own as part of their evaluation.

Sugestão: 語彙の誤用（"neighborhoods"は複数形で不自然、"looks enjoyable"も不適切）や文法ミスが多いです。また、最後の"Mighty"は意味不明です。より正確で自然な表現を使い、文を整理しましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I shared my dinner with my neighbors last night. I cooked too much food, so I decided to share it with them, and I was very happy because they seemed to enjoy it.

Sugestão: 文が長くて複雑ですが、文法ミスや不自然な表現が目立ちます。例えば、「I definitely choose my families」は「I would definitely choose my family」が適切です。より簡潔で明確な表現を心がけましょう。

Exemplo: I would definitely share good news with my family because I love them. Although I don't live with them now since I am studying in France, I always contact them first when I have good news.

Sugestão: 繰り返しや冗長な表現が多く、文の構造が不自然です。例えば、「it is it because it becomes」は誤りで、「because it is a good way to start a conversation」が適切です。簡潔で論理的な回答を目指しましょう。

Exemplo: I often share what happened recently with my friends because it helps start conversations, and I enjoy chatting with them a lot.

× My parents used to tell me sharing something makes made people happy.

✓ My parents used to tell me sharing something made people happy.

The sentence incorrectly uses both 'makes' and 'made' together. Since the context is past habitual action ('used to'), the verb should be in the past tense 'made'. The present tense 'makes' is incorrect here.

× I like to watch that People are surprising when I share my Japanese experience.

✓ I like to see that people are surprised when I share my Japanese experience.

The phrase 'watch that People are surprising' is incorrect. 'Watch' is not appropriate here; 'see' fits better. Also, 'People' should not be capitalized, and 'surprising' should be 'surprised' to describe their reaction.

× I think the answers of the exams were the assignments should not be shared because I believe people should should take exams themselves and the answer is one of their evaluation.

✓ I think the answers to the exams or the assignments should not be shared because I believe people should take exams themselves and the answers are part of their evaluation.

The phrase 'answers of the exams were the assignments' is confusing and incorrect. It should be 'answers to the exams or the assignments'. Also, 'should should' is a repetition error. 'Answer is one of their evaluation' should be plural 'answers are part of their evaluation'.

× Yes, I shared my dinner with neighborhoods yesterday night.

✓ Yes, I shared my dinner with neighbors last night.

'Neighborhoods' is incorrect; the correct term is 'neighbors' when referring to people. Also, 'yesterday night' is not standard English; 'last night' is the correct expression.

× I cooked too much to eat alone so I decided to share my dinner with neighborhood and I was very happy because they looks enjoyable.

✓ I cooked too much to eat alone so I decided to share my dinner with my neighbors and I was very happy because they looked happy.

'Neighborhood' refers to an area, not people; 'neighbors' is correct. 'They looks enjoyable' is incorrect; 'they looked happy' or 'they seemed to enjoy it' is appropriate. 'Looks' should be 'looked' to match past tense.

× I definitely choose my families because I love my families and but now I have, I don't live with my family because I'm currently studying in France.

✓ I definitely choose my family because I love my family, but now I don't live with them because I'm currently studying in France.

'Families' is plural but should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family. Also, 'and but now I have' is awkward and redundant; 'but now I don't live with them' is clearer.

× So if I know some good news about me, I have to get in touch with my family firstly.

✓ So if I know some good news about myself, I have to get in touch with my family first.

'About me' should be 'about myself' to correctly use the reflexive pronoun. 'Firstly' is less common in spoken English; 'first' is more natural.

× I often share what happened yesterday recently with my friends because it is it because it becomes the opportunity to start conversation and I really want to chat with my friends a lot, so I always do it.

✓ I often share what happened recently with my friends because it becomes an opportunity to start a conversation, and I really want to chat with my friends a lot, so I always do it.

The phrase 'what happened yesterday recently' is redundant; 'recently' suffices. The repeated 'because it is it because' is incorrect and should be simplified. 'Start conversation' needs an article: 'start a conversation'.