Sharing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。特に動詞の時制や単語の選択に注意し、簡潔で明確な表現を心がけましょう。例えば、「sharing」や「shelling」の使い方が不自然です。

Exemplo: Yes, my parents taught me to share toys and food when I was a child because sharing helps build good relationships and makes me feel emotionally richer.

Sugestão: 内容が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。伝えたいことを整理し、具体的な例を使って簡潔に答える練習をしましょう。

Exemplo: I like to share traditional foods like sushi with my friends because I want them to enjoy delicious original dishes.

Sugestão: 繰り返しや不自然な表現が多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、簡潔に述べることを意識しましょう。

Exemplo: I think makeup is not suitable for sharing because it is personal and sharing it can be unhygienic.

Sugestão: 文が途中で終わっているように感じられ、内容が不明瞭です。話の流れを整理し、具体的な内容を簡潔に伝える練習をしましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, about a week ago, I shared a wonderful memory about my friend's birthday with my friends.

Sugestão: 意味が不明瞭で、文法的な誤りが多いです。誰にニュースを伝えたいかを明確にし、理由を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

Exemplo: I usually share good news with my mother because we talk together during dinner and share daily information.

Sugestão: 文法や語彙の誤りが多く、内容が伝わりにくいです。話したいニュースの種類を整理し、簡潔に表現する練習をしましょう。

Exemplo: I often talk to my friends about daily events, like special occasions or plans to hang out together.

× Yes, when I was a child my parents teach taught me about shelling, food or some toys because which makes me which makes my emotional more rich and sharing is very important to build relationship with my friends.

✓ Yes, when I was a child my parents taught me about sharing food or some toys because it made me emotionally richer and sharing is very important to build relationships with my friends.

The verb 'teach' should be in the past tense 'taught' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was a child'. Also, 'shelling' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'sharing'. The phrase 'which makes me which makes my emotional more rich' is incorrect; it should be 'because it made me emotionally richer' to correctly express cause and effect in past tense. 'Relationship' should be plural 'relationships' to match the context.

× What else was a more so like shelling is all traditional cuisine I wanna share with my friend to for original the food such as sushi or something I wanna share the delicious.

✓ What I also like to share is traditional cuisine with my friends, such as sushi or other delicious foods.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and word order making it unclear. 'Shelling' should be 'sharing'. 'I wanna share with my friend to for original the food' is incorrect; it should be 'I like to share traditional cuisine with my friends'. 'Something I wanna share the delicious' is ungrammatical; it should be 'such as sushi or other delicious foods'.

× I think, I think one of the the things is not use not sharing, not to share the makeup too because which is very sensitive and private things. So I don't think and share make up share is not good for my health for my.

✓ I think one of the things that should not be shared is makeup because it is very sensitive and private. So, I don't think sharing makeup is good for my health.

The sentence has redundant phrases and incorrect pronoun use. 'Not use not sharing' is confusing and should be 'should not be shared'. 'Which is very sensitive and private things' should be 'because it is very sensitive and private'. The phrase 'I don't think and share make up share is not good for my health for my' is ungrammatical and should be simplified to 'I don't think sharing makeup is good for my health'.

× Yes, I share with my friends too. I share the a wonderful memory stories to my friends when I about one weeks ago, I share the, uh, my friend's birthday story to my friends because they.

✓ Yes, I shared with my friends too. About one week ago, I shared a wonderful memory story, my friend's birthday story, with my friends.

The verb 'share' should be in the past tense 'shared' to match the past time frame 'about one week ago'. 'Memory stories' should be singular 'memory story' or plural 'memory stories' but consistent. The sentence structure is fragmented and needs reordering for clarity.

× I think my mother often told me. I often told my share my speak to my mother because well the my family looting is waiting dinner while sharing the daily information.

✓ I often talk to my mother because my family is waiting for dinner while sharing daily information.

The sentence has incorrect pronouns and unclear phrases. 'I think my mother often told me' is incomplete and unclear. 'I often told my share my speak to my mother' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I often talk to my mother'. 'My family looting is waiting dinner' is incorrect; it should be 'my family is waiting for dinner'.

× I often took my talk to my friends about daily happening because I want you. I want to talk to my friend about daily happen such as event or closing today's clothing or hanging out with my another friend.

✓ I often talk to my friends about daily happenings because I want to share events like going out or hanging out with other friends.

The verb 'took' is incorrect; it should be 'talk'. 'Daily happening' should be plural 'daily happenings'. 'I want you' is incorrect and should be 'I want to'. 'Closing today's clothing' is unclear and likely a mishearing; it should be 'going out' or similar. 'My another friend' should be 'another friend'.