Movies— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain reasons with linking words like 'because' or 'also'.

Exemplo: I used to watch movies often when I was younger, but now I rarely do because I am busy pursuing my master's degree. Also, I find many movies nowadays quite boring, so I don't feel motivated to watch them.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent by combining short sentences and using linking words. Avoid repetition and provide a clear preference with reasons or examples. This will make your answer more natural and effective.

Exemplo: I usually enjoy watching action and mystery movies, as well as sci-fi films. However, I don't like romantic movies. Among these genres, action movies are my favorite because they are exciting and full of energy.

Sugestão: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and pronunciation errors, and by organizing your ideas clearly. Use linking words to explain your preference and avoid unnecessary details that confuse the listener.

Exemplo: I prefer watching movies at home because it is more comfortable and convenient for me. For example, I can relax on my bed and enjoy snacks like popcorn and juice while watching.

Sugestão: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct vocabulary. Explain your opinion with specific reasons and examples, and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I think watching movies in other languages is very useful. For instance, since my second language is Spanish, watching Spanish movies helps me improve my listening skills. Additionally, I practice shadowing by repeating scenes to enhance my speaking ability.

× When I was younger I like to watch movies but now we're becauses I'm busy for pursuing my masters degree and in my studies I don't watch a lot of movies right now.

✓ When I was younger I liked to watch movies but now we're busy because I'm pursuing my master's degree and in my studies I don't watch a lot of movies right now.

The verb 'like' should be in the past tense 'liked' to match the past time frame 'When I was younger'. Also, 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. 'For pursuing' is incorrect; it should be 'pursuing' without 'for'. 'Masters degree' should be 'master's degree' with an apostrophe to indicate possession.

× Additionally, there are another reason because move is in my opinion right now are very boring.

✓ Additionally, there is another reason because movies, in my opinion, are very boring right now.

The phrase 'there are another reason' is incorrect; 'reason' is singular, so it should be 'there is another reason'. 'Move' should be plural 'movies' to agree with 'are very boring'.

× Actually I like action movies or mystery movies. Sci-fi. Except romantic movies.

✓ Actually, I like action movies, mystery movies, and sci-fi movies, but I don't like romantic movies.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper conjunctions. Combining them into one sentence with appropriate conjunctions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Actually I prefer watching at home because I find it more confortable an suitable for me.

✓ Actually, I prefer watching at home because I find it more comfortable and suitable for me.

The word 'confortable' is misspelled; it should be 'comfortable'. Also, 'an' should be 'and' to connect the two adjectives.

× Becauses uh, I like to be a laying down on my bed and with my hand on my hand, sorry my popcorn or my juice brothers and go to the cinema.

✓ Because, uh, I like to lie down on my bed with my hand holding my popcorn or my juice, rather than going to the cinema.

The phrase 'be a laying down' is incorrect; the correct form is 'lie down'. 'With my hand on my hand' is unclear and corrected to 'with my hand holding'. 'Brothers' is irrelevant and removed. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Yes I think it's useful becauses the my second foreign language is Spanish and if you want to improve your language you should see movies to improve your listening and improve your SB king.

✓ Yes, I think it's useful because my second foreign language is Spanish, and if you want to improve your language, you should watch movies to improve your listening and speaking skills.

'Becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. 'See movies' is better expressed as 'watch movies'. 'SB king' is a typo and corrected to 'speaking skills'. Commas are added for clarity.

× You can make shadowing by post the scene and shadow the scene.

✓ You can practice shadowing by pausing the scene and repeating it.

'Make shadowing by post the scene' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'practice shadowing by pausing the scene and repeating it'. This clarifies the intended meaning and corrects preposition and verb usage.