Movies— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I usually watch drama movies because I enjoy feeling deep emotions. For example, they often make me reflect on life and human relationships, which I find very engaging.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Focus on stating your preference clearly, then support it with specific reasons using linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: I prefer watching movies at home because it is more comfortable and affordable. Also, I can pause the movie to discuss interesting parts with my family, which is not possible in the cinema.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many errors. Provide a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then explain why with specific details and linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, watching movies in other languages is useful because it helps improve language skills. For instance, I watch English movies to hear the original accents and expressions, which enhances my listening and speaking abilities.

× I don't know why, maybe because after I watched I want to feel it.

✓ I don't know why, maybe because after I have watched it, I want to feel it.

The sentence requires the present perfect tense 'have watched' to indicate an action completed recently with relevance to the present. Using 'watched' alone (simple past) is less appropriate here.

× I love feel like I'm more disappointed.

✓ I love to feel like I'm more disappointed.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to feel' rather than the base form 'feel' alone. This corrects the verb pattern after 'love'.

× We want to err and discuss that which is not possible in the cinema.

✓ We want to talk and discuss things that are not possible in the cinema.

The original sentence is unclear and contains the word 'err' which is likely a mistake. Replacing 'err' with 'talk' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Additionally, what you would have more affordable to make Brian for me.

✓ Additionally, it is more affordable for me to do that at home.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronoun usage and structure. Rephrasing it to express affordability and location clearly corrects the errors.

× Understand the order language.

✓ I want to understand other languages.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding the subject and verb and correcting 'order language' to 'other languages' makes the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× I usually watch movies in English because I want to listen the original voices, of course of people and actors.

✓ I usually watch movies in English because I want to listen to the original voices, of course, of people and actors.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object. Adding 'to' corrects the prepositional error.

× And this is a white team, but it's over the final.

✓ And this is a white theme, but it's overall final.

The original sentence contains unclear and possibly incorrect words. Assuming 'white team' should be 'white theme' and 'over the final' should be 'overall final' improves clarity, but the sentence remains somewhat ambiguous. More context would help for precise correction.