Movies— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and a bit long. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating phrases. Also, add linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details with linking words.

Exemplo: I usually watch movies on weekends because that's when I'm free. Moreover, I enjoy watching them with my family as it helps me relax and recharge for the week ahead.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to use correct tenses and clearer vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons.

Exemplo: I usually watch science-related movies because I am passionate about science. They inspire me to learn more and possibly become a scientist who discovers new things that can benefit the world.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive. Try to avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to make your answer smoother. Also, provide a more specific reason why you prefer watching at home.

Exemplo: I don't mind watching movies either at the cinema or at home. However, I prefer watching at home because it's more comfortable and I can relax without distractions.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammar errors and repetitions. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and give a clear recommendation.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe watching movies in other languages is very useful. It helps improve my English listening skills, and I always recommend it to anyone learning a new language because it makes learning more enjoyable and effective.

× I try to watch movies during the weekend because that's the that's the only time that I'm actually free from anything.

✓ I try to watch movies during the weekend because that's the only time that I'm actually free from anything.

The phrase 'that's the that's the' contains a repetition error. Removing the repeated phrase corrects the sentence and improves clarity.

× I just try to watch movies on a weekend with my family whenever I feel I need so much to keep going in life.

✓ I just try to watch movies on weekends with my family whenever I feel I need it so much to keep going in life.

The preposition 'on a weekend' is incorrect when referring to weekends in general; 'on weekends' is the correct expression. Also, adding 'it' after 'need' completes the sentence grammatically.

× I found scientific movies really interesting because it I'm a science girly and it just makes me feel like the science is the most important thing in the world and I need to become a scientist and search for new things that is related to world.

✓ I find scientific movies really interesting because I'm a science girl and it just makes me feel like science is the most important thing in the world and I need to become a scientist and search for new things that are related to the world.

The verb tense should be present ('find' instead of 'found') to match the habitual action. 'Science girly' is incorrect; 'science girl' is appropriate. 'That is related to world' should be 'that are related to the world' to agree in number and include the definite article.

× I don't really mind watching a movie in in cinema or at home because I don't really find the difference between watching it in cinema and watching at home.

✓ I don't really mind watching a movie in the cinema or at home because I don't really find the difference between watching it in the cinema and watching at home.

The preposition 'in cinema' is incorrect; it should be 'in the cinema' to specify the place. Also, the repeated 'in' is a typographical error.

× But for my case I find it more relaxing when I whenever I watch it at home.

✓ But in my case, I find it more relaxing whenever I watch it at home.

The phrase 'when I whenever' is redundant; 'whenever' alone suffices. Also, 'for my case' is better expressed as 'in my case'.

× That's the thing I actually believe because watching movies help me to improve my English and improve my listening in English and I always recommend to people to watch movies whenever you're trying to learn a new language because it actually help help me a lot.

✓ That's the thing I actually believe because watching movies helps me to improve my English and improve my listening in English and I always recommend to people to watch movies whenever you're trying to learn a new language because it actually helps me a lot.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'watching movies'. The repeated 'help' is a typographical error and should be removed.