Movies— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and redundancy by stating your answer clearly and concisely. Also, clarify relationships (e.g., 'girlfriends' vs. 'family') to avoid confusion. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I usually watch movies every weekend with my friends. We enjoy different genres like romantic and action films because it helps us relax and spend quality time together.

Sugestão: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your preferences.

Exemplo: I usually watch action and romantic movies, but I especially enjoy military films because they have intense action scenes and realistic weaponry, which makes them exciting to watch.

Sugestão: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to organize your reasons logically and avoid informal expressions like 'even Prime TV'.

Exemplo: I prefer watching movies at home because cinemas can be crowded. At home, I have access to Netflix and Prime Video, so I can choose movies according to my taste, which makes the experience more enjoyable and relaxing.

Sugestão: Clarify your ideas and avoid unclear phrases like 'learn about a new birds'. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific examples to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Yes, watching movies in other languages is very useful. It helps you learn new vocabulary and improve your listening skills. Additionally, it allows you to understand different cultures better, which makes the experience more interesting.

× I watch movies on every weekend, on weekends.

✓ I watch movies every weekend.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used before 'every weekend'. The correct expression is 'every weekend' without 'on'.

× I used to spend time with my girlfriends.

✓ I usually spend time with my girlfriends.

The phrase 'used to' implies a past habit that no longer happens, but the context suggests a current habit. Using 'usually' correctly expresses a habitual action in the present.

× We often watch movies on weekends, such as sometimes love movies and sometimes action movies.

✓ We often watch movies on weekends, sometimes love movies and sometimes action movies.

The phrase 'such as' is incorrectly used here. It should be omitted to make the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× It is a good way to remove stress from your head and uh, and to spend time with your family.

✓ It is a good way to relieve stress and to spend time with your family.

The phrase 'remove stress from your head' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'relieve stress'. Also, 'your family' may not be appropriate if the student is talking about friends; context should be considered.

× Normally I watch action and love movies, but I really like watching movies related to military because there are there is a plenty of action in those movies and I really like that when they are using weapons and all that.

✓ Normally I watch action and love movies, but I really like watching military-related movies because there is plenty of action in those movies and I really like it when they use weapons and all that.

The phrase 'there are there is a plenty of action' is incorrect; 'there is plenty of action' is correct because 'plenty' is singular. Also, 'related to military' should be 'military-related'. The phrase 'I really like that when they are using weapons' is awkward; 'I really like it when they use weapons' is better.

× So that's kind of pretty enjoy enjoyable moment for me.

✓ So that's a pretty enjoyable moment for me.

The phrase 'kind of pretty enjoy enjoyable' is redundant and incorrect. 'A pretty enjoyable moment' is the correct form.

× Well, I prefer to watch movies at home because cinemas are really crowded sometimes and at home we have a Netflix, even Prime TV and we can choose our movie by according to our taste and it is more fun to watch movie at home 'cause you are relaxing.

✓ Well, I prefer to watch movies at home because cinemas are really crowded sometimes and at home we have Netflix and even Prime TV, and we can choose our movie according to our taste. It is more fun to watch movies at home because you are relaxing.

The phrase 'a Netflix' is incorrect; 'Netflix' is a proper noun and does not need an article. 'By according to' is incorrect; 'according to' alone is correct. Also, 'watch movie' should be 'watch movies'. The informal contraction ''cause' should be 'because' for clarity.

× Yeah, I think that it is very useful to watch language in different languages.

✓ Yeah, I think that it is very useful to watch movies in different languages.

The phrase 'watch language' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'watch movies'.

× First of all, you get to learn about a new birds in a different language.

✓ First of all, you get to learn about new words in a different language.

The phrase 'a new birds' is incorrect because 'birds' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. The intended word is likely 'words'.

× You can build a new skill.

✓ You can build new skills.

The phrase 'a new skill' is not wrong, but 'new skills' is more natural in this context when talking about language learning.

× Sometimes people find it more interesting to watch different movies from different culture because they get to know their culture as well as their.

✓ Sometimes people find it more interesting to watch different movies from different cultures because they get to know their culture as well as others'.

The phrase 'different culture' should be plural 'different cultures'. The ending 'as well as their' is incomplete; it should be 'as well as others'' to indicate other cultures.