E-books— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons with linking words. For example, explain why paper books engage you more and mention specific features like graphics.

Exemplo: I prefer paper books over e-books because they keep me more engaged both physically and mentally. Moreover, paper books often have detailed graphics that e-books lack, which enhances my reading experience.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat understandable but needs clearer structure and linking words. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific details using connectors like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: I usually read online when the course materials are not available in my textbooks. So, I search for the required information on online search engines to supplement my studies.

Sugestão: Your answer has good intention but is confusing and repetitive. Use clear sentences with proper linking words like 'because' and avoid filler words. Be specific about why online reading will increase.

Exemplo: Yes, I will read more online in the future because online books are more accessible and often contain updated information that paper books may not have.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but has unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain reasons with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: I like to read manga online because physical copies are very expensive. So, reading e-books helps me save money for other things.

Sugestão: Your answer has good points but lacks coherence and clear linking. Use linking words like 'however' or 'also' properly and avoid vague phrases. Be specific about differences and effects.

Exemplo: In my opinion, reading online differs from reading paper books in several ways. For example, reading online can strain your eyes due to screen exposure, whereas paper books do not cause this problem. Also, physical books help me stay more mentally and physically engaged.

× At before people books over ebooks because it keeps me engaged physically and mentally more than that of e-books.

✓ I prefer paper books over e-books because they keep me engaged physically and mentally more than e-books do.

The original sentence has singular and plural mismatches, such as 'people books' and 'that of e-books'. The correction uses the plural 'paper books' and matches the verb 'keep' accordingly. Also, 'that of e-books' is replaced with 'e-books do' for clarity.

× Also paper books as a lots of graphics that I don't think that e-books can.

✓ Also, paper books have a lot of graphics that I don't think e-books can have.

The phrase 'a lots of graphics' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of graphics'. Also, the verb 'have' is needed to complete the sentence. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× It will provide also paper books I have been reading from my side.

✓ Also, paper books provide content that I have been reading personally.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction restructures the sentence to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× So after that I start searching it up on the online engines and start reading the given context.

✓ So after that, I start searching for it on online search engines and start reading the relevant content.

The phrase 'searching it up on the online engines' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'searching for', and 'online search engines' is the proper term.

× Yes, of course I'll read more online in the future base because I think, uh, in the future more than papers online books will be more reliable because most of the things that are not provided physically that is in paper is no available in. E-books.

✓ Yes, of course I'll read more online in the future because I think that online books will be more reliable than paper books since many things not available in paper are available in e-books.

The sentence has modal verb and sentence structure issues. 'In the future base' is incorrect; 'in the future' suffices. The comparison is clarified, and the sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Ivory for reading manga online, which is very much costly in a physical textbook, so I like to save my money for other things rather than spending it on a paper book.

✓ I prefer reading manga online, which is very costly in physical textbooks, so I like to save my money for other things rather than spending it on paper books.

'Ivory' seems to be a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'I prefer'. 'A physical textbook' is changed to plural 'physical textbooks' to generalize. 'A paper book' is changed to 'paper books' for consistency.

× In my point of view, reading online is definitely different than reading it physically.

✓ From my point of view, reading online is definitely different from reading it physically.

The correct prepositions are 'from my point of view' and 'different from', not 'in my point of view' or 'different than'.

× When you start reading online, you need to search it up on the online engine or which degrades your health condition by degrading your eyesight.

✓ When you start reading online, you need to search for information on online engines, which can degrade your eyesight and harm your health.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.