E-books— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be more grammatically correct and concise. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'however'. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Exemplo: I prefer e-books because they are convenient and easy to carry. However, when I need to study detailed notes, I choose paper books because they are easier to annotate.

Sugestão: Your answer should be more structured and grammatically correct. Use linking words like 'and' or 'also' to connect ideas. Be specific about the time and type of reading, and avoid vague phrases. Also, correct sentence construction will improve clarity.

Exemplo: I usually read online every day, especially novels and news articles. This helps me stay informed about world events and improves my knowledge.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer sentence structure and linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Also, avoid repetition and be more concise while giving specific reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I will read more online in the future because it helps me improve my imagination and language skills. Moreover, it keeps me focused and positive throughout the day.

Sugestão: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'sometimes' and 'for example'. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will make your answer clearer.

Exemplo: I like to read various things online, but I usually prioritize news articles and novels. For example, recently I read a novel called 'The Secret of Happiness' by Javin Carroll, a famous author who has written over 1000 novels.

Sugestão: Your answer should start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Be more specific about differences and avoid vague statements. Also, improve grammar and sentence flow.

Exemplo: Reading online is different from paper because online sources offer a wider range of content, such as detailed historical information about ancestors. Therefore, I find online reading more convenient and informative.

× To be honest it's depend on my situation and on my work.

✓ To be honest, it depends on my situation and on my work.

The verb 'depend' should be in the third person singular present tense 'depends' to agree with the subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule in English.

× Sometime I have the note or content that available on the paper books that I gave priority to read from my books.

✓ Sometimes I have notes or content that are available in paper books, so I give priority to reading from my books.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Note' and 'content' should be plural or uncountable as appropriate. 'Available' needs 'are' to form the correct verb phrase. 'Gave' should be 'give' to match present tense. 'Read' should be 'reading' after 'priority to'.

× And along with this I think ebooks is a convenient source compare than paper books and due to advanced technology mostly people use ebooks.

✓ And along with this, I think ebooks are a more convenient source compared to paper books, and due to advanced technology, most people use ebooks.

'Ebooks' is plural, so 'is' should be 'are'. 'Compare than' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'compared to'. 'Mostly people' should be 'most people'.

× I usually read online on my daily basis and I read about the different novels and sometimes I use to read news article that enhance my knowledge about the incident that occurred around around the world.

✓ I usually read online on a daily basis and I read different novels, and sometimes I read news articles that enhance my knowledge about incidents that occur around the world.

'On my daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'. 'Use to read' is incorrect; it should be 'read'. 'News article' should be plural 'news articles'. 'Incident' should be plural 'incidents' to match 'around the world'. 'Occurred' changed to 'occur' to maintain present tense.

× Along with this it also enhance the my intelligence level make me a more product.

✓ Along with this, it also enhances my intelligence level and makes me more productive.

'Enhance' should be 'enhances' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'The my' is incorrect; only 'my' is needed. 'Make me a more product' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me more productive'.

× Yes, I would say I will read more online in the future because I am interesting person in reading different novels because I want to increase my imagination and language skills and I think it is the only way to enhance concentration power and to feel positive throughout the day.

✓ Yes, I would say I will read more online in the future because I am an interested person in reading different novels, as I want to increase my imagination and language skills, and I think it is the only way to enhance concentration power and feel positive throughout the day.

'Interesting person' should be 'interested person' to describe the speaker's interest. Added 'an' before 'interested person' as it is singular countable noun. 'To feel' is better without 'to' after 'and' for parallel structure.

× There are lot of things that are available online but I give priority to read sometime a news article and sometime novels.

✓ There are lots of things that are available online, but I give priority to reading sometimes news articles and sometimes novels.

'Lot' should be 'lots' or 'a lot' to be grammatically correct. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'A news article' should be plural 'news articles' to match context. 'Give priority to read' should be 'give priority to reading'.

× The last time I read the novels and it's about the secret of happiness that written by the author at Javin Carroll and is a a famous author that wrote a more than 1000 novels.

✓ The last time I read a novel, and it was about the secret of happiness written by the author Javin Carroll, who is a famous author that has written more than 1000 novels.

'Read' in past tense is correct, but 'the novels' should be 'a novel' for singular. 'It's' should be 'it was' to match past tense. 'That written' should be 'written' as past participle. 'At Javin Carroll' is incorrect; should be 'by the author Javin Carroll'. 'Wrote a more than 1000 novels' should be 'has written more than 1000 novels'.

× I think it's quite different from paper because there are a lot of content that not available in a paper.

✓ I think it's quite different from paper because there is a lot of content that is not available on paper.

'Content' is uncountable singular, so 'there are' should be 'there is'. 'Not available' needs 'is' to form correct verb phrase. 'In a paper' should be 'on paper'.

× They are only found online, such as about the ancestors and about the history.

✓ It is only found online, such as information about ancestors and history.

'They' refers to plural, but 'content' is singular uncountable, so 'It' is correct. 'About the ancestors and about the history' is better expressed as 'information about ancestors and history'.