Science— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงข้อผิดพลาด เช่น 'It's broaden' ควรเป็น 'It broadens' และ 'it's help me' ควรเป็น 'it helps me' นอกจากนี้ควรเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

Exemplo: Yes, I love discovering new things through learning science because it broadens my horizons and provides a lot of useful knowledge that I can apply in my daily life. Also, it helps me understand the world better.

Sugestão: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำ เช่น 'biology help me' ควรเป็น 'biology helps me' และ 'I was as engineer' ควรเป็น 'I am an engineer' รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความต่อเนื่องของประโยค

Exemplo: Yes, I use my science knowledge almost every day. For example, biology helps me understand my body better and improve my diet and exercise. Plus, I am an engineer, which requires a lot of knowledge in mechanics and physics.

Sugestão: ควรแก้ไขไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'it pay' ควรเป็น 'they play' และ 'to in protecting environment' ควรเป็น 'in protecting the environment' รวมถึงเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความสมบูรณ์ของประโยค

Exemplo: I would like to learn more about scientific fields related to sustainable development, especially renewable energy and green technology. These areas interest me because they play a crucial role in protecting the environment and creating a better future.

Sugestão: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'it offer' ควรเป็น 'it offers' และ 'should only provide for S specialist' ควรเป็น 'should only be provided to specialists' รวมถึงลดคำพูดที่ไม่จำเป็น เช่น 'uh'

Exemplo: In my opinion, it is important to learn some basic science because it offers benefits in terms of critical thinking and problem-solving skills. However, specific theories should only be provided to specialists.

Sugestão: ควรแก้ไขคำผิด เช่น 'washing' ควรเป็น 'watching' และ 'experiment show' ควรเป็น 'experiment shows' รวมถึงปรับไวยากรณ์และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

Exemplo: I used to enjoy watching documentaries and experiment shows a lot when I was young. However, as I have grown up, I have become busier and have less time to spend on this hobby.

× It's broaden my horizons with a lot of useful knowledge that I can apply for my daily life.

✓ It has broadened my horizons with a lot of useful knowledge that I can apply to my daily life.

The original sentence uses 'It's broaden' which is incorrect. The correct form is 'It has broadened' to indicate present perfect tense. Also, 'apply for' should be 'apply to' as the correct preposition for applying knowledge to life.

× Also it's help me.

✓ Also, it helps me.

The original sentence 'it's help me' is incorrect because 'help' should be in third person singular present tense 'helps' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, 'it's' is a contraction for 'it is' which does not fit here.

× For example biology help me understand my body better and improve my diet and exercise.

✓ For example, biology helps me understand my body better and improve my diet and exercise.

Missing comma after 'For example'. Also, 'biology' is singular and requires 'helps' instead of 'help'. The sentence structure is improved with the comma.

× Plus I was as engineer which require a lot of knowledge in mechanical and physics.

✓ Plus, I was an engineer which required a lot of knowledge in mechanics and physics.

The phrase 'was as engineer' is incorrect; it should be 'was an engineer'. 'Require' should be past tense 'required' to match 'was'. Also, 'mechanical' should be 'mechanics' as the field of study.

× These areas interest me because it pay a crucial role to in protecting environment and create better future.

✓ These areas interest me because they play a crucial role in protecting the environment and creating a better future.

Subject 'it' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'areas'. 'pay' should be 'play' and 'to in' is incorrect; correct preposition is 'in'. Also, 'create' should be 'creating' to maintain parallel structure.

× In my opinion, it is significant to learn some, uh basic science because it offer benefit in terms of critical thinking and problem solving skills.

✓ In my opinion, it is significant to learn some basic science because it offers benefits in terms of critical thinking and problem-solving skills.

Comma after 'some' is unnecessary. 'offer' should be 'offers' to agree with singular 'it'. 'benefit' should be plural 'benefits' to match context. 'problem solving' should be hyphenated as 'problem-solving'.

× However, those specific theories should only provide for S specialist.

✓ However, those specific theories should only be provided for specialists.

The sentence is awkward and incorrect. 'provide for S specialist' is incorrect; it should be passive 'should only be provided for specialists' to convey meaning properly.

× I used to enjoy washing documentaries and experiment show a lot when I was young.

✓ I used to enjoy watching documentaries and experiment shows a lot when I was young.

'washing' should be 'watching'. 'experiment show' should be plural 'experiment shows' to be grammatically correct.

× However, as I grow up I am more and more busy and have less time to spend for this hobby.

✓ However, as I have grown up, I am busier and have less time to spend on this hobby.

'grow up' should be present perfect 'have grown up' to indicate completed action. 'more and more busy' is better expressed as 'busier'. 'spend for' should be 'spend on' as correct preposition.