Science— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and grammatically accurate. Try to avoid minor errors such as 'permits me understand' (should be 'permits me to understand') and 'This subject often help me' (should be 'These subjects often help me'). Also, try to use linking words like 'for example' or 'because' to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy studying science at school because it broadens my knowledge about important topics, such as health in biology. For example, physics helps me to understand how electricity works, which I find fascinating. These subjects often help me in everyday life and inspire me to learn more about the world around me.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Avoid sentence fragments like 'Try to understand which part of my body that is being affected.' Also, clarify your ideas fully and use linking words to connect your points. For example, explain how you use your knowledge when dealing with electricity.

Exemplo: Absolutely, I use my science knowledge daily. For instance, when I have a health issue, I apply my biology knowledge to understand which part of my body is affected. Additionally, I use my understanding of electricity when dealing with minor electrical problems at home.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there are minor grammatical errors such as 'make a better decisions' (should be 'make better decisions') and 'adapt a healthy lifestyle' (should be 'adopt a healthy lifestyle'). Also, try to use linking words like 'for example' and 'additionally' effectively to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Definitely, I would love to learn more about biology because it would broaden my understanding of how the human body functions. For example, this knowledge could help me make better decisions when visiting a hospital or discussing health issues with doctors. Additionally, understanding biology might inspire me to adopt a healthy lifestyle.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there are some grammatical errors such as 'encourage them to adopt A healthy lifestyle' (should be 'encourages them to adopt a healthy lifestyle') and 'make better choice' (should be 'make better choices'). Also, try to use linking words like 'for instance' to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I believe it is crucial for everyone to study science or at least have some basic knowledge of it because it helps people understand important aspects of their health and encourages them to adopt a healthy lifestyle. For instance, my basic understanding of biology has helped me make better choices regarding exercise and nutrition, which has improved my overall well-being.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. For example, 'one of my favourites in television' should be 'one of my favourite types of programmes on television'. Also, 'This help me' should be 'This helps me'. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words like 'for instance' properly with commas.

Exemplo: Absolutely, I think science programmes are one of my favourite types of programmes on television. For instance, I often watch a programme called Health Evolution every Saturday. This helps me to stay up to date with trending news on health and also inspires me.

× This subject often help me in everyday life and inspire me to learn more about the world around me.

✓ This subject often helps me in everyday life and inspires me to learn more about the world around me.

The subject 'This subject' is singular, so the verbs 'help' and 'inspire' must be in the third person singular form 'helps' and 'inspires' to agree with the subject.

× I use my knowledge on science in my everyday life.

✓ I use my knowledge of science in my everyday life.

The correct preposition to express possession or relation with 'knowledge' is 'of', not 'on'. 'Knowledge of science' is the standard phrase.

× Try to understand which part of my body that is being affected.

✓ I try to understand which part of my body is being affected.

The original sentence lacks a subject and is incomplete. Adding 'I' as the subject and removing 'that' after 'part of my body' corrects the sentence structure.

× Additionally when there is a little electricity.

✓ Additionally, when there is a little electricity, I try to understand how it works.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a main verb and object. Adding a main clause completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I would love to learn more about biology because it will help broaden my understanding on how the human body functions.

✓ I would love to learn more about biology because it will help broaden my understanding of how the human body functions.

The correct preposition after 'understanding' is 'of', not 'on'. 'Understanding of' is the standard collocation.

× Having this knowledge could enable me to make a better decisions when visiting a hospital or discussing health issue with doctors.

✓ Having this knowledge could enable me to make better decisions when visiting a hospital or discussing health issues with doctors.

The plural forms 'decisions' and 'health issues' are needed here because the context implies multiple possible decisions and issues.

× I believe it is crucial for everyone to study science or at least have some basic knowledge of it because it helps people understand the important aspects of their health and encourage them to adopt A healthy lifestyle.

✓ I believe it is crucial for everyone to study science or at least have some basic knowledge of it because it helps people understand the important aspects of their health and encourages them to adopt a healthy lifestyle.

The verb 'helps' refers to 'it' (science), so the following verb should be 'encourages' to agree with the singular subject. Also, 'A' should be lowercase 'a' in 'a healthy lifestyle'.

× For instance, my basic understanding of biology has helped me make better choice regarding exercise and nutrition, which has improved my overall well-being.

✓ For instance, my basic understanding of biology has helped me make better choices regarding exercise and nutrition, which has improved my overall well-being.

The plural form 'choices' is appropriate here because it refers to multiple decisions about exercise and nutrition.

× I often watch program every Saturday on Health Evolution.

✓ I often watch a program every Saturday on Health Evolution.

The singular countable noun 'program' requires an article 'a' before it.

× This help me to stay up to date about trending news on health and also inspire.

✓ This helps me to stay up to date about trending news on health and also inspires me.

The singular subject 'This' requires the verbs 'help' and 'inspire' to be in the third person singular form 'helps' and 'inspires'. Also, 'inspires' needs an object 'me' to complete the meaning.