Internet— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议回答时注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复和语无伦次，尽量用完整句子表达清楚意思。

Exemplo: I started using the internet when I was in primary school. Our teacher used WeChat to assign homework, and we used it to complete our tasks.

Sugestão: 回答较长且有语法错误，表达不够简洁自然。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体说明，注意语法和句子结构。

Exemplo: I go online every day because the internet is very convenient and accessible. People use it for learning, working, and entertainment.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清楚的问题，建议注意时态和句子完整性，避免重复和断句不当。

Exemplo: Yes, when I was in primary school, I was a bit addicted to the internet. My mom hid my iPod to stop me from playing games and using the internet too much.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺乏具体内容。建议直接回答问题，并用具体例子或理由支持观点，保持句子完整和连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I often browse my phone or watch videos for several hours a day.

Sugestão: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子说明互联网的重要性，注意句子结构和词汇准确。

Exemplo: I can't imagine life without the internet because it is essential for many things, like taking the subway or working in a company.

× Our teacher use the we chat to put assignment and we.

✓ Our teacher uses WeChat to put assignments for us.

主语是单数的“teacher”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“uses”。另外，“WeChat”是专有名词，应大写；“assignment”应为复数形式“assignments”；“and we”表达不完整，改为“for us”更合适。

× Uh, use days. To get to the task.

✓ Uh, we use it every day to get the tasks.

原句表达不清，缺少主语和谓语，且“use days”用法错误，应为“use it every day”。“to get to the task”应改为“to get the tasks”，更符合语境。

× When I go online every day, you know in the modern society no one can live without the Internet that is very convenient and accessible.

✓ I go online every day. You know, in modern society, no one can live without the Internet. It is very convenient and accessible.

原句时态混乱，且句子过长。应将“when I go online every day”改为“I go online every day”，并拆分句子，使表达更清晰。

× You can use it to learning and working even.

✓ You can use it for learning, working, and even entertainment.

“use it to learning”用法错误，应为“use it for learning”；“working even”表达不完整，补充“and even entertainment”使句子完整。

× Why was in primary school I am a little bit addiction to the Internet and when I when I got home I. Couldn't help to find my iPod and playing some games, so my mom hide the iPod and don't allow me to use the Internet.

✓ When I was in primary school, I was a little bit addicted to the Internet. When I got home, I couldn't help but find my iPod and play some games, so my mom hid the iPod and didn't allow me to use the Internet.

时态错误：描述过去的事情应使用过去时，如“was”，“was addicted”，“couldn't help but”，“hid”，“didn't allow”。“addiction”应改为形容词“addicted”。“couldn't help to find”应为“couldn't help but find”。

× Well, maybe I spend time on line or just going through my phone or watch some video, you know, it's very. Oh.

✓ Well, maybe I spend time online just going through my phone or watching some videos, you know, it's very relaxing.

“on line”应合写为“online”。“going through my phone or watch some video”时态不一致，应改为“going through my phone or watching some videos”。句尾“it's very. Oh.”不完整，补充为“it's very relaxing”。

× I can't imagine the world without Internet because you know that everything is Internet.

✓ I can't imagine the world without the Internet because, you know, everything depends on the Internet.

“Internet”前应加定冠词“the”。“everything is Internet”表达不当，改为“everything depends on the Internet”更符合语境。

× You go out for a subway or have a work in the company.

✓ You go out by subway or work in a company.

“go out for a subway”用法错误，应为“go out by subway”。“have a work”错误，应为“work”。“in the company”改为“不定冠词a company”，更通顺。

× I can't live without Internet.

✓ I can't live without the Internet.

“Internet”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指网络。