Part 1
Examinador
When did you start using the internet?
Candidato
I have been using the Internet for year after Warner. A year ago I had started a mobile Internet because I bought a mobile phone.
Examinador
How often do you go online?
Candidato
For example, one day I go I often go online because my study related for Internet I have to. Enters a Cambridge up and four I enter the committee job. I need Internet.
Examinador
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
Candidato
When I was a child, there is no Internet in my country, but in other countries people were using the Internet and after three or four years, then in those Big East also using the Internet because many people both mobile phones.
Examinador
Do you think you spend too much time online?
Candidato
Yes, nobody is. I spent too much time for social media for English apps because my study related for online. And social media.
Examinador
What would you do without the internet?
Candidato
If my Internet had gone out I usually am reading books or make homework to do my home works and also if I have games on my phone I play them.
When did you start using the internet?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va noaniqliklar mavjud. Ingliz tilida vaqtni aniq ifodalash uchun to'g'ri vaqt shakllarini ishlatishingiz kerak. Shuningdek, gaplaringizni qisqa va aniq qilib, mavzuga to'g'ridan-to'g'ri javob bering.
Exemplo: I started using the internet about two years ago when I bought my first mobile phone with internet access.
How often do you go online?
Pontuação: 35.0Sugestão: Javobingizda gaplar tartibsiz va tushunarsiz. Ingliz tilida fikrlaringizni aniq va mantiqiy tarzda ifodalash uchun oddiy va to'g'ri gap tuzish qoidalariga rioya qiling. Shuningdek, bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning.
Exemplo: I often go online every day because I need the internet for my studies and work related to Cambridge exams.
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Javobingizda mavzudan chalg'ish va grammatik xatolar bor. Ingliz tilida o'tgan zamonni to'g'ri ishlatib, fikrlaringizni aniq va qisqa qilib ifodalashga harakat qiling.
Exemplo: When I was a child, there was no internet in my country, so I was not allowed to use it. However, other countries had internet access at that time.
Do you think you spend too much time online?
Pontuação: 35.0Sugestão: Javobingizda gaplar mantiqsiz va grammatik xatolar mavjud. Ingliz tilida fikrlaringizni aniq va to'g'ri ifodalash uchun oddiy gaplardan foydalaning va mavzuga mos so'zlarni tanlang.
Exemplo: Yes, I think I spend too much time online, especially on social media and English learning apps because my studies require it.
What would you do without the internet?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: Javobingizda vaqt va fe'l shakllarini to'g'ri ishlatishga e'tibor bering. Gaplaringizni qisqa va aniq qilib, bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning.
Exemplo: If the internet went out, I would usually read books or do my homework. Sometimes, I also play games on my phone.
× I have been using the Internet for year after Warner.
✓ I have been using the Internet for a year after Warner.
The word 'year' is singular and needs an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct. Without the article, the sentence is incomplete and incorrect.
× A year ago I had started a mobile Internet because I bought a mobile phone.
✓ A year ago I started using mobile Internet because I bought a mobile phone.
The past perfect tense 'had started' is unnecessary here because the sentence refers to a simple past event. Also, 'a mobile Internet' is incorrect; 'mobile Internet' is uncountable and does not need an article.
× For example, one day I go I often go online because my study related for Internet I have to.
✓ For example, I often go online because my studies are related to the Internet.
The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects word order and verb usage.
× Enters a Cambridge up and four I enter the committee job.
✓ I enter Cambridge and the committee job.
The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect prepositions and words. The correction simplifies the sentence to a grammatically correct form, though the original meaning is somewhat unclear.
× I need Internet.
✓ I need the Internet.
'Internet' is a singular noun that usually requires the definite article 'the' when referring to the global network.
× When I was a child, there is no Internet in my country, but in other countries people were using the Internet and after three or four years, then in those Big East also using the Internet because many people both mobile phones.
✓ When I was a child, there was no Internet in my country, but in other countries people were using the Internet. After three or four years, people in those big cities also started using the Internet because many people had mobile phones.
The verb 'is' should be in the past tense 'was' to match the past time frame. The sentence also needed restructuring for clarity and correct verb tenses.
× Yes, nobody is. I spent too much time for social media for English apps because my study related for online. And social media.
✓ Yes, I spend too much time on social media and English apps because my studies are related to online learning and social media.
The original sentence misuses pronouns and prepositions. 'Nobody is' is incorrect in this context. Also, 'spent' should be 'spend' to match the present tense question. Prepositions 'on' and 'to' are used correctly in the correction.
× If my Internet had gone out I usually am reading books or make homework to do my home works and also if I have games on my phone I play them.
✓ If my Internet goes out, I usually read books or do my homework, and if I have games on my phone, I play them.
The conditional sentence requires the present simple tense 'goes out' for a real possibility. Also, 'make homework' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'do homework'. The verb forms are corrected to match the habitual actions.