Internet— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như "I start" nên là "I started" và "get update" nên là "get updates". Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và chọn từ phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

Exemplo: I started using the Internet when I was about 15 years old because my parents allowed me to access online information. It was very useful for me to get updates about school events and to learn new things from my teachers.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều và danh từ đếm được, ví dụ "education website" nên là "educational websites" và "classmate" nên là "classmates". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I usually go online whenever I have free time or after finishing my classes because it helps me relax and unwind after a busy day. For example, I check educational websites and communicate with my classmates to complete group projects.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng từ ngữ phù hợp hơn, ví dụ "sophisticated time" không đúng ngữ cảnh, nên dùng "specific time" hoặc "particular time". Ngoài ra, thì động từ cần nhất quán, "restrict" nên là "restricted" để phù hợp với thì quá khứ.

Exemplo: I usually use the Internet every day, so I can't really remember a specific time when I wasn't allowed to use it. However, I think when I was younger, my parents sometimes restricted my Internet use because they wanted me to focus on my studies.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ "illustrates of time" và "setting spike sign" không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và câu rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý hiệu quả.

Exemplo: Yes, I think I spend too much time online, especially on social media and watching videos, which sometimes wastes my time and affects my productivity. However, I try to limit my usage by setting time limits for myself.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý cách dùng từ và ngữ pháp, ví dụ "If I didn't have the Internet time" nên là "If I didn't have the Internet", "instructed by Internet" không đúng, nên dùng "distracted by the Internet". Ngoài ra, câu nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: If I didn't have the Internet, I think I would spend more time reading books because they are a great source of reliable information. Usually, I don't have enough time to read every day because I'm often distracted by the Internet, so without it, I could focus more on enjoying books and learning new things.

× I start using the Internet when I was about 15 years old because my parents allowed me to access online information.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was about 15 years old because my parents allowed me to access online information.

The sentence describes a past event, so the verb 'start' should be in the past tense 'started' to match the time frame.

× It was very useful for me to get update about school events and learn new things from my teacher.

✓ It was very useful for me to get updates about school events and learn new things from my teacher.

The noun 'update' should be plural 'updates' because it refers to multiple pieces of information over time.

× I check education website and communicate with my classmate to complete group projects.

✓ I check educational websites and communicate with my classmates to complete group projects.

The adjective 'education' should be 'educational' to describe the websites. Also, 'website' and 'classmate' should be plural to indicate multiple websites and classmates.

× However, I think when I was younger my parents sometimes restrict my Internet use because they want me to focus on my study.

✓ However, I think when I was younger my parents sometimes restricted my Internet use because they wanted me to focus on my studies.

The modal verb 'restrict' should be in past tense 'restricted' to match the past time frame. Also, 'study' should be plural 'studies' to refer to academic work in general.

× Yes, I think I've spent too much time online, especially on social media and watching videos sometimes illustrates of time and it affects my productivity.

✓ Yes, I think I've spent too much time online, especially on social media, and watching videos sometimes wastes time and affects my productivity.

The phrase 'illustrates of time' is incorrect; it should be 'wastes time' to convey the intended meaning. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding commas and conjunctions.

× However, I try to limit my usage by setting spike sign for online.

✓ However, I try to limit my usage by setting a spike sign for online use.

The phrase 'setting spike sign' is unclear and likely incorrect; adding the article 'a' and clarifying 'for online use' improves clarity.

× If I didn't have the Internet time, I think I would spend more time reading books because they're a great source of reliable information.

✓ If I didn't have Internet access, I think I would spend more time reading books because they're a great source of reliable information.

The phrase 'Internet time' is incorrect; 'Internet access' is the correct term to express the ability to use the Internet.

× Usually I don't want enough time to read every day because I'm so often instructed by Internet, so without it I could focus more on enjoying book and learning new things.

✓ Usually I don't have enough time to read every day because I'm so often distracted by the Internet, so without it I could focus more on enjoying books and learning new things.

The verb 'want' is incorrect here; it should be 'have' to express possession of time. 'Instructed' is incorrect; 'distracted' fits the context. 'Book' should be plural 'books'.