Internet— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 答えは内容的に伝わりますが、文法と語順の改善、単数・複数の一致、冠詞の使用、冗長表現の簡潔化に注意するとより自然になります。また、話の構成としてトピック文→具体例（体験の一場面）→感想の順でまとめると効果的です。具体的には「two decades ago」「the Internet」「a vast amount of information」「it was a very interesting experience」などの正しい表現を使い、文を3〜4文以内に収めましょう。

Exemplo: I started using the Internet about twenty years ago. I clearly remember the first time I got online because I felt overwhelmed by the amount of information available. Although it was a lot to take in, the experience inspired me to learn more.

Sugestão: 頻度をはっきり述べることはできていますが、文法（主語と動詞の一致）、不可算名詞の扱い、冗長な言い回し、繋ぎ語の整理が必要です。回答はまず頻度を一文で述べ、その後理由を1〜2文で補足しましょう。例えば「I am almost always online.」「to find information」「to check daily updates」などの表現に直すと自然です。

Exemplo: I am online almost all the time. I usually go online to look up information or to check daily news and updates, because it's convenient and saves time.

Sugestão: 具体的な場面を示したのは良いですが、時制と語順、冠詞、語彙の選択（a flight, the Internet, feel anxious）を直す必要があります。また、最後で「それが良くない」と言いたいなら、理由と対策（例：代わりに読書をする）を一文付けると回答が締まります。簡潔に2〜3文で答えましょう。

Exemplo: Yes. For example, when I’m on a flight the Internet is sometimes disabled. In those cases I feel a bit anxious because I’m used to being online, so I try to read or plan my schedule instead.

Sugestão: 意見は述べられていますが、文法（冠詞、前置詞、動詞の形）、表現の明確化、冗長語の削減が必要です。まず結論（Yes/No/It depends）を明言し、その理由を明確に1〜2文で述べると良いです。例えば「I don’t think I spend too much time online when I have a purpose」→その後具体例を示す形にします。

Exemplo: I don’t think I spend too much time online when I have a clear purpose. For example, I go online to study or find information, and I try to limit my browsing when I don’t have a specific task.

Sugestão: 回答の意図（インターネットがない場合に身体活動や学習をする）は伝わりますが、語彙の誤用（a catastrophic surrounding?）、文の不完結、冗長なフレーズが問題です。まず想定を示す一文（If there were no Internet, I would...）を使い、具体的な活動（exercise, read books, meet friends）を列挙し、理由（stay healthy, socialise）を加えると明確になります。文は最大5文、できれば2〜3文でまとめてください。

Exemplo: If there were no Internet, I would spend more time on physical activities and studying. For instance, I would go to the gym, take outdoor walks, and read books to learn new things while staying fit.

× It was about two decades ago when I started using Internet.

✓ It was about two decades ago when I started using the Internet.

The noun 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the' in this context because we refer to a specific global network. Add 'the' before 'Internet'.

× There are vast amount of information which overwhelmed me but inspired me.

✓ There is a vast amount of information that overwhelmed me but inspired me.

'Amount' with uncountable 'information' takes singular verb 'is', so use 'There is'. Also 'information' is uncountable, so use 'a vast amount of information'. Use 'that' as the relative pronoun for things. Replace 'which' with 'that' for restrictive clause. 具体的には、主語が不可算名詞'information'であるため単数扱いにし、動詞も'singular'に合わせます。 'which'より'restrictive clause'には'that'が自然です。

× So it's very interesting experience for me.

✓ So it was a very interesting experience for me.

The speaker refers to a past event ('started using the Internet two decades ago' and 'was connected'), so the sentence should be in past tense: 'it was a very interesting experience'. Also include the article 'a' before 'very interesting experience'. 過去の出来事を述べているため時制を過去形に合わせ、冠詞'a'を入れます。

× I almost always are connected to the Internet, actually when I uh, would like to find out in interesting informations and also, uh, check the uh, daily unnecessary informations and also uh, everything is quite helpful to check Internet.

✓ I am almost always connected to the Internet, actually when I would like to find interesting information and also check daily, unnecessary information; overall the Internet is very helpful.

Use 'am' with subject 'I' (present tense). 'Information' is uncountable, so do not pluralize it as 'informations'. Remove extraneous 'in' before 'interesting'. Streamline repetition and use appropriate articles. Use punctuation to separate ideas. 'I'に対して現在のbe動詞は'am'です。不可算名詞'information'は複数形にしないでください。

× For example, I ride a airplanes, the Internet connection is disabled sometimes.

✓ For example, when I ride airplanes, the Internet connection is sometimes disabled.

Do not combine singular article 'a' with plural 'airplanes'. Use 'ride airplanes' or 'take a flight'. Place adverb 'sometimes' in a natural position and use 'when' to introduce the clause. 'a airplanes'は文法的に誤りです。'when I ride airplanes'のようにします。

× In such case, I feel a sense of anxiety, because, uh, other than such a time, I'm always connected to the uh Internet and uh, I think it is not good, so I should.

✓ In such cases, I feel a sense of anxiety, because apart from those times I'm always connected to the Internet, and I think that is not good so I should reduce my usage.

Use plural 'cases' when speaking generally. 'Apart from' is more natural than 'other than such a time'. Complete the idea: 'I should' needs an object or infinitive like 'reduce my usage'. Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary articles. 一般的な場合を指すなら'cases'にし、'I should'の後には目的語が必要です。

× I think connecting to the online uh is a helpful and insightful when I have some purpose, uh, for example, I would like to check some informations or learn something.

✓ I think connecting online is helpful and insightful when I have a purpose; for example, I would like to check some information or learn something.

Do not use 'the' before 'online' in this general sense; say 'connecting online'. 'A helpful and insightful' lacks a noun — use 'helpful and insightful' as adjectives modifying the situation. 'Information' is uncountable, so use singular. Remove fillers. 'connecting online'のように表現し、'information'は不可算名詞です。

× So I think uh are always a being connected to Internet.

✓ So I think I am always connected to the Internet.

Subject 'I' requires verb 'am'. Remove incorrect 'are' and unnecessary 'a being'. Include 'the' before 'Internet'. 'I'に対して動詞は'am'を使い、'Internet'には定冠詞'the'を付けます。

× Typically, I would like to explore my physical activity like learning and training and so on.

✓ Typically, I like to pursue physical activities such as learning and training, and so on.

Use 'activities' plural because multiple types are implied. Prefer present 'I like' for habitual actions rather than 'would like' which implies desire. Use 'such as' for examples. 習慣的行為には現在形を使い、複数の活動を示すために'activities'とします。

× Uh, being connected to Internet is a good thing.

✓ Being connected to the Internet can be a good thing.

Add 'the' before 'Internet'. Adding 'can be' softens the claim and is natural. Alternatively 'is a good thing' is acceptable but include 'the'. 'Internet'には定冠詞が必要です。

× On the other hand, our staying fit is also important.

✓ On the other hand, staying fit is also important.

Use 'staying fit' without possessive 'our' in this general statement. 'Our staying fit' is grammatical but sounds awkward; omit 'our' for clarity. 一般的な主張では'our'は不要で、'staying fit'だけで十分です。

× So I typically do training like a catastrophic surrounding and I always assess feel a sense of.

✓ So I typically do training in challenging environments and I always feel a sense of accomplishment.

The original phrase is unclear. 'Catastrophic surrounding' is not idiomatic; 'challenging environments' fits. Complete the second clause: 'I always feel a sense of accomplishment' makes grammatical and logical sense. Ensure verbs and nouns match. 意味が不明確なので'challenging environments'や'feel a sense of accomplishment'のように自然な表現に直します。