Breakfast— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and ensure grammatical accuracy. For example, instead of repeating 'really delicious', you could say: "I usually eat bread and cheese, sometimes adding tomatoes and cucumbers because they taste fresh. Additionally, I often have boiled eggs for protein."

Exemplo: I usually eat bread and cheese, sometimes adding tomatoes and cucumbers because they taste fresh. Additionally, I often have boiled eggs for protein, which helps me stay full until lunch.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and is incomplete. Focus on structuring your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to organise your ideas logically. Also, avoid grammatical errors such as 'it's raise' and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe breakfast is very important because it improves brain function and helps us concentrate on our work. Moreover, it is especially crucial for children as it provides the energy they need for learning and growth.

Sugestão: Try to reduce hesitation sounds like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your speech more fluent. Also, use linking words such as 'for example' and 'however' to connect your ideas clearly. Keep your sentences concise and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: When I was a child, I had lots of free time, especially during summer holidays, so I could rest well. However, nowadays I have to get up early for work and I don't have enough time to relax in the mornings.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid repeating words like 'don't don't'. Use linking words to explain reasons logically.

Exemplo: No, I am used to getting up early because it helps me concentrate on my tasks and be more productive. If I wake up late, I usually feel tired and unmotivated.

× I usually eat bread and cheese and sometimes I add some tomatoes and cucumbers with them because it's they are really delicious.

✓ I usually eat bread and cheese and sometimes I add some tomatoes and cucumbers with them because they are really delicious.

The phrase 'it's they are' is incorrect because 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is' which does not agree with the plural subject 'they'. The correct pronoun to refer to multiple items is 'they'. Therefore, 'it's they are' should be corrected to 'they are'.

× Yes, actually I believe that breakfast is really important because it's raise our brain function and we need when especially when we need to concentrate with our duties and with our career plans, they are really important and especially for and the other thing that I like to mention is really important for children because they need to.

✓ Yes, actually I believe that breakfast is really important because it raises our brain function and we need it especially when we need to concentrate on our duties and our career plans. They are really important and especially, the other thing that I like to mention is that it is really important for children because they need it.

The original sentence has several issues: 'it's raise' is incorrect because 'it' requires the verb in third person singular form 'raises' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'concentrate with' is incorrect preposition usage; the correct preposition is 'concentrate on'. Additionally, the sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity; adding 'it' after 'need' and restructuring improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× ...especially when we need to concentrate with our duties and with our career plans...

✓ ...especially when we need to concentrate on our duties and our career plans...

The verb 'concentrate' is followed by the preposition 'on' to indicate the focus of attention. Using 'with' is incorrect in this context.

× I prefer to get up in early morning because I can concentrate my duties and I can do lots of thing simultaneously.

✓ I prefer to get up early in the morning because I can concentrate on my duties and I can do lots of things simultaneously.

The phrase 'lots of thing' is incorrect because 'thing' should be pluralized to 'things' when preceded by 'lots of'. Also, 'concentrate my duties' is incorrect; the verb 'concentrate' requires the preposition 'on' before the object.

× I prefer to get up in early morning because I can concentrate my duties...

✓ I prefer to get up early in the morning because I can concentrate on my duties...

The phrase 'get up in early morning' is incorrect because the preposition 'in' is not used before 'early morning'. The correct phrase is 'get up early in the morning'. Also, 'concentrate' requires the preposition 'on' before its object.

× When I get up late in morning, I feel exhausted and I feel bored, so I don't don't have any.

✓ When I get up late in the morning, I feel exhausted and bored, so I don't have any energy.

The sentence has a repeated word 'don't don't' which is a typographical error. Also, 'in morning' lacks the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'I don't have any' is incomplete and needs an object; adding 'energy' completes the thought logically.