Breakfast— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'sometimes', you can say 'at times' or 'other times'.

Exemplo: It depends on my mood and what I have in the fridge. At times, I eat eggs with soy sauce; other times, I have bread with cheese. Occasionally, I just drink tea with some bread.

Sugestão: Make your sentences clearer and more grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain your opinion and provide reasons. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'never go from home without one bit of something'.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe breakfast is important because it provides energy for the day. When I was a child, my grandfather always told me never to leave home without eating something.

Sugestão: Use correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Also, organize your answer with linking words to compare past and present clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, there are differences. When I was a child, my mother gave me tea and butter, which I didn't like. Now, I prefer eggs instead of butter because I enjoy them more.

Sugestão: Try to use past and present tenses correctly and avoid filler words. Use linking words to explain the changes and their effects clearly.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't like to change my morning routine because I recently changed it. I used to sleep late, but now I go to bed early and wake up early, which has improved my days significantly.

× Uh, it's depend on my mood.

✓ Uh, it depends on my mood.

The verb 'depend' should be in the third person singular present tense form 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× It's depend what I have at home in my fridge.

✓ It depends on what I have at home in my fridge.

The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the preposition 'on' is needed after 'depends' to correctly express dependence on something.

× Sometimes I'm eating eggs, uh, with soy sauce.

✓ Sometimes I eat eggs, uh, with soy sauce.

The simple present tense 'eat' is appropriate here to describe habitual actions, rather than the present continuous 'I'm eating'.

× Sometimes I'm eating just, umm, tea and some bread and that's it.

✓ Sometimes I just eat tea and some bread and that's it.

Again, simple present tense 'eat' is used for habitual actions instead of present continuous 'I'm eating'.

× Yes, I think that breakfast is important and when I was a child my grandfather always told me that never go from home without one bit of something because they believe that it was about your day's energy.

✓ Yes, I think that breakfast is important and when I was a child my grandfather always told me to never go from home without a bit of something because he believed that it was about your day's energy.

The phrase 'never go' should be 'to never go' to correctly express the infinitive after 'told me'. Also, 'they believe' should be 'he believed' to maintain past tense and singular subject agreement.

× Yes, of course it has difference because when I was a child my mother was giving me tea and butter, butter, but I didn't like it.

✓ Yes, of course it has a difference because when I was a child my mother used to give me tea and butter, but I didn't like it.

The noun 'difference' requires the article 'a' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'was giving' is better expressed as 'used to give' to indicate habitual past action.

× And no, I'm changing it with egg because I like it.

✓ And no, I have changed it to egg because I like it.

The present continuous 'I'm changing' is incorrect here; the present perfect 'I have changed' better expresses a completed change relevant to the present.

× No, I don't because some days ago I already changed my morning routine when I was, uh, sleeping.

✓ No, I don't because some days ago I already changed my morning routine when I was, uh, sleeping.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed.

× It's midnight. I was sleeping, umm, late in the morning.

✓ It was midnight. I was sleeping late in the morning.

The phrase 'It's midnight' should be in past tense 'It was midnight' to match the past context. Also, 'late in the morning' is acceptable but could be clearer as 'late at night' if referring to midnight.

× Now I change everything.

✓ Now I have changed everything.

The present perfect 'have changed' is appropriate here to indicate a recent change with present relevance, rather than simple present 'change'.

× I'm sleeping early and I'm waking up early and my days become better and better.

✓ I sleep early and wake up early and my days become better and better.

For habitual actions, simple present tense 'sleep' and 'wake up' are preferred over present continuous 'I'm sleeping' and 'I'm waking up'.