Breakfast— Part 1 Relatório

× I usually drink a bottle of warm milk for breakfast because I don't want to cook for myself on the morning because I want to save time for actual sleep.

✓ I usually drink a bottle of warm milk for breakfast because I don't want to cook for myself in the morning because I want to save time for actual sleep.

介词短语中，表示时间的“in the morning”是固定搭配，不能用“on the morning”。

× However, sometimes I will eat some bread to keep health.

✓ However, sometimes I eat some bread to keep healthy.

这里表达习惯性动作，使用一般现在时更合适，且“keep health”应为“keep healthy”，因为“keep”后接形容词表示保持某种状态。

× Yes I seen breakfast in really important because I really get a stomach ache since I went to the university because I don't want to spend time for breakfast so normally I just drink a bottle of warm milk.

✓ Yes, I see breakfast is really important because I have really gotten a stomach ache since I went to the university because I don't want to spend time on breakfast so normally I just drink a bottle of warm milk.

“seen”是过去分词，句中应使用一般现在时“see”表达观点；“get a stomach ache”应用现在完成时“have gotten a stomach ache”表示从过去到现在的经历；“spend time for breakfast”应改为“spend time on breakfast”，介词使用错误。

× There is a big difference between the morning of my childhood and now on.

✓ There is a big difference between the mornings of my childhood and now.

“now on”用法错误，应直接用“now”；“morning”应用复数形式“mornings”表示两个时间段的早晨。

× However, now I only can eat some bread and drink a bottle of milk to.

✓ However, now I can only eat some bread and drink a bottle of milk too.

“only can”顺序错误，正确顺序是“can only”；“to”应为“too”表示“也”。

× I don't want to change my morning routine because I want to icing be organized and I have make a clear plan for my daily tasks.

✓ I don't want to change my morning routine because I want to be organized and I have made a clear plan for my daily tasks.

“icing be organized”是错误表达，应为“to be organized”；“have make”应为“have made”，动词时态错误。

× I have make a clear plan for my daily tasks.

✓ I have made a clear plan for my daily tasks.

“have make”中“make”应为过去分词“made”，构成现在完成时。

× but sometimes I really have some emergent tasks to finish so I have got.

✓ but sometimes I really have some urgent tasks to finish so I have to go.

“have got”用法不当，表达必须做某事应使用“have to”；“emergent”用词不当，应为“urgent”；句尾缺少动词，补充“go”使句子完整。