Language— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more structured by starting with a clear topic sentence and then adding specific details. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence clarity. For example, clarify the timeline and usage of each language and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I can speak three languages: Cantonese, English, and Putonghua. I learned Cantonese from my family since childhood, and I started learning English and Putonghua at school. Nowadays, I use all three languages regularly in different situations.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating the same idea and try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Yes, learning a new language can be challenging because each language has unique sounds and vocabulary. For instance, pronouncing unfamiliar words and memorizing new grammar rules require a lot of practice.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas and by making sentences more concise and natural. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I want to learn Japanese because I enjoy traveling to Japan. Learning the language will help me communicate with locals and understand their culture better.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to finish your sentences and use linking words to make your ideas flow logically. Also, avoid vague phrases and be more specific about the benefits of learning English.

Exemplo: I learn English because it is widely spoken worldwide. By speaking English, I can communicate with people from different countries and learn about their cultures.

× When I was small my kindergarten teacher taught me to speak and when I am growing up I use these 3 languages altogether.

✓ When I was small, my kindergarten teacher taught me to speak, and as I was growing up, I used these 3 languages altogether.

The phrase 'when I am growing up' is incorrect because it mixes past and present tenses. Since the action refers to the past, it should be 'as I was growing up'. Also, 'use' should be in past tense 'used' to maintain tense consistency.

× I think speaking English is an integral part among all the languages because English is commonly used in many countries all around the world and through speaking English I can access to different nationalities and different peoples in different.

✓ I think speaking English is an integral part of all the languages because English is commonly used in many countries all around the world, and through speaking English I can access different nationalities and different peoples in different places.

The phrase 'integral part among all the languages' should be 'integral part of all the languages' because 'part of' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'access to' is incorrect; 'access' is a verb here and should not be followed by 'to'. The sentence was incomplete at the end; adding 'places' clarifies the meaning.